“It’s not the ceremony I want to go to. It’s the after party! Think about it, thousands of people going crazy all over the country, celebrations galore! Let the food and wine flow!” This is possibly my favorite line in this whole chapter. It's so fitting, it's scary~.
Now that that is out of the way, I can easily say I enjoyed this chapter as much as the last one. The first operation is in place and the action is really about to start... I'm excited~~!
I only noticed a couple of grammar errors (literally two, maybe one) and it's not something major, like a glaring plot hole. xDD
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! Why can't I get all the errors! I've went over it a billion times by now! Thanks for pointing that out, I'll try ans fix it later.
I liked that line too, so American don't you think? Then I wondered to myself if he said it because thats who he is or if he said it because he knew Japan expected him to say it.
It's okay xD;; It happens to me too and it is annoying... When it happens to me, it's because I read over the mistake. And then I laugh at myself afterward! I sometimes have to step away from the paper for an hour to forget the more precise parts, so it will be a clean reading. :3
It is a very American line (food and festivities to look forward to~!) and as I read it really seemed as if he was using it as a shield and as a way of letting Japan know what was going to happen. The reader can see the double meaning! I was shocked when he said it, but pleased all the same! xDD
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Now that that is out of the way, I can easily say I enjoyed this chapter as much as the last one. The first operation is in place and the action is really about to start... I'm excited~~!
I only noticed a couple of grammar errors (literally two, maybe one) and it's not something major, like a glaring plot hole. xDD
I wait patiently for the next installment! :3
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I liked that line too, so American don't you think? Then I wondered to myself if he said it because thats who he is or if he said it because he knew Japan expected him to say it.
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It is a very American line (food and festivities to look forward to~!) and as I read it really seemed as if he was using it as a shield and as a way of letting Japan know what was going to happen. The reader can see the double meaning! I was shocked when he said it, but pleased all the same! xDD
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