Sharing Sunsets

Feb 24, 2011 18:29

It's not a secret that my last job kind of sapped any and all interest and love I had for writing, fic or otherwise. Everything I started eventually stalled after like... a chapter or two. And I started to realise that maybe I was holding on eventhough I didn't have the love for it anymore. So I let it go, figuring that when it was ready to come ( Read more... )

raf, optimus prime, tf prime, fluff

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papyrus_quill March 1 2011, 12:12:12 UTC
Thanks for reading, glad you liked.

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lonegamer78 February 24 2011, 20:14:34 UTC
High notes! High notes, high notes, high notes! I can practically HEAR Optimus/Peter speaking here! So much WAFF! Raf's voice is perfectly matching here! And the snowball! :D <3 <3 <3

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papyrus_quill March 1 2011, 12:13:19 UTC
Lol that's good. Kinda what I was aiming for with the dialogue. Thanks

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femme4jack February 25 2011, 04:39:03 UTC
You really captured Prime's voice here. I could just hear him! I really love this particular Prime, so weary and yet so kind. And loved the bit about breaking it to Ratchet gently that they don't have school on Sundays. Among the human characters, I am very fond of Raf, and am glad he got his snowball :)

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raichu100 February 25 2011, 22:07:35 UTC
^This! just about everything I wanted to say. Also really cute and happy read XD good job!

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papyrus_quill March 1 2011, 12:15:38 UTC
Hehe well Ratchet was already freaking out that they didn't have school on Saturdays, what if he had to be told it was two days per week instead of one? XD

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femme4jack March 1 2011, 14:39:23 UTC
And just wait until he finds out about summer break!

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kurichi_chan February 25 2011, 04:58:59 UTC
This was really really good. Both of them were so much in character and I could practically hear and see these scenes unfolding. Awesome job.

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papyrus_quill March 1 2011, 12:16:12 UTC
Thanks! Glad you liked it.

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iccara February 25 2011, 14:45:17 UTC
This was so lovely! The character voices were spot on, especially Prime's, and I empathized so much with Raf. And the snowball? Perfect! I love that you worked that in!

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papyrus_quill March 1 2011, 12:17:04 UTC
Optimus is so SO hard to write, for me. Especially Cullen's Optimus, so I'm really glad it worked out. Thanks!

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