10 Orders - Leave Me Alone

Jun 15, 2010 00:05

Title: Dance in the Dark
Pairing/Characters: Prowl/Jazz
Prompt: Leave Me Alone
Rating: lets say R for sensitive topics
Warnings: human femslash (kissing mostly), mentions of sex and prostitution
Summary: Jazz disguises herself as one of Amsterdam’s famous “window-girls”, under the watchful eye of Prowl.

Resides in the same 'verse as Don't Lie To Read more... )

prowl/jazz, human tfs, prowl, 10 orders, femslash, jazz

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baroness_lamia June 14 2010, 16:47:45 UTC
Ohhh, I like the sexy possession Prowl has for Jazz. That was hot! :D Keep up the good work!

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papyrus_quill June 15 2010, 04:11:16 UTC
Will do.

Possessive Prowl is possessive... and sexy it seems. She doesn't tolerate guys messin' with her Jazz.

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wicked3659 June 14 2010, 17:03:48 UTC
This is excellent I love it! XD

*works on bunny*

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papyrus_quill June 15 2010, 04:12:04 UTC
Glad you like it... and thanks for the long discussion about the workings of Holland's red-light district XD

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prancingtiger86 June 14 2010, 19:11:35 UTC
love it when Prowl gets all possessive over Jazz, fantastically written! :)

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odd_stick June 14 2010, 20:38:22 UTC
Yay! I'm very glad you continued this. Great addition to the earlier fic/chapter! ^_^

Warm fuzzies for P & J, but I can't help but be a little sad too. This premise hits very close to real life, as you state in the summary. I very much empathize with what Jazz is saying at the end about the situations these women, girls, boys and men are in, be it willing or not. :(

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papyrus_quill June 15 2010, 04:16:49 UTC
Sometimes I like to throw a bit of subtle focus on real-life issues and misconceptions into a fic.

My 'verse Jazz was once part of that world, as a dancer (see my "Dreamers and Dancers" story), so s/he's fully aware of the stigma that can come attached with those types of jobs. Being in tune with human culture also, s/he was bound to see a parallel.

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vejiraziel June 14 2010, 21:05:57 UTC
You have no idea how much I squealed when Prowl kicked the figurative and literal balls out of that guy.

But I feel so sad about Jazz's thoughts, it's sad others in real life don't have the fairy tale ending that s/he got with Prowl, and so glad you keep touching on Jazz 'not being easy'.

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papyrus_quill June 15 2010, 04:19:31 UTC
I thought you'd like it. And I did want Prowl to kick some butt.

Jazz is one of the lucky ones... and I will keep focusing on Jazz not being "easy" till it kills me. Just because s/he's friendly with everyone doesn't automatically = jump into anyone's bed. Rawrr!

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