Comments | papyrus_quill: Discordant Flight

papyrus_quill

Discordant Flight - 1/?

Jul 08, 2009 23:55

Based on and from eerian_sadow's "Survival Instincts" Universe... this chronologues what takes place before the events in her story, and perhaps what also happens in between chapters ( Read more... )

ramhorn, cassettes, arcee trio, sideswipe, eject, sunstreaker, rewind, movie, steeljaw, rotf, blaster

Comments 7

saberfrost July 9 2009, 03:44:21 UTC

SOunds really interesting so far, keep it up!

mmouse15 July 9 2009, 04:14:21 UTC

*grins* Oh, this is interesting. I'm rather looking forward to Sunny and Sides getting off that shuttle and finding Arcee, Chromia, and Moonracer there.

The fireworks will rival the 4th of July displays, me thinks.

papyrus_quill July 9 2009, 04:33:08 UTC

LOL... well maybe they wont rival, but should be close enough.

tirya56 July 9 2009, 15:52:10 UTC

Looks like it's off to a great start! I like the descriptions of what the mechlets look and act like. I'm curious to see how bringing the twins in will show us further dynamics in the group. Keep it up!

xaefryl July 9 2009, 18:38:37 UTC

♥ ♥ ♥ Cassettes~ :3

I loved Chromia's reaction to finding out Sunstreaker and Sideswipe were arriving.

cmdrtekk July 9 2009, 23:09:24 UTC

Nice start, I like the interplay in conversation between everyone. You conveyed much about the relationships/personalities as each interacted with each other.