Crusade - Prologue

[papyrus_quill]

So this was the human-TF fic I was talking about in the previous entry, and here's the set-up/opening "chapter", though the main story will be kicking off from chapter one, depending on how this goes down I guess.

Comments

[huntingospray]

*Glee!* I like it. Lots!

[ante_luce]

Woo. *in awe*

[mmouse15]

Wow, Jo, great idea. I like that it's in first person (Prowl), and the setup is great. As always, your writing is very readable and flows well.

I would like to see more of this, please, because I really like the idea and the setting, and it's always fun to see how things play out when peopleTFs are thrown into entirely new situations.

Plus, it's the Crusades and there shall be awesome battles in armor...

[papyrus_quill]

Well the prologue is in first person, the rest of it will go back to third person style since its a tricky bit of a story to write...

however I was thinking of interluding with first person chap-lets in between the longer chapters, especially if there's alot of exposition and explanation that needs to go in.

In this case, the whole set up was a long-winded explanation in itself, so I figured it might be a bit more interesting and less monotonous if it was Prowl's POV.

[l_shades]

Hrm...interesting...very interesting. I don't think anyone has done the crusades before, and I've got a bit of an interest in them ('tis where the Order of St John started out, doncha know). This one's a watch!