Punishment.

Aug 13, 2010 01:22

Title:Punishment (One shot)
Rating: Better just go NC-17 to be safe.
Genre: Little bit of angst, little bit of smut, but I gave you a happy ending!
Paring: TabiRi
Summary: Seungri's been bad and Seunghyun is determined to show him the error of his ways.

Punishment )

tabiri, fanfiction, smut, nc-17, angst

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griluvisvip August 13 2010, 06:32:06 UTC
SPOOTTTTTTTTT FOR NINJA COOKIE

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papersanguine August 13 2010, 06:32:50 UTC
Baby you deserve a MOUNTAIN of cookies for being so ninja all the time!!

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griluvisvip August 13 2010, 06:43:39 UTC
heehee why thank-you my love ;D You deserve a MOUNTAIN of cookies for being so awesome all the time ;D

even though this wasn't my OTP it was still awesome and so very cute XD I love the dark aspect of it and that little hint of happiness at the very ending. But during that whole dark, angsty, punishment part my SAW heart skipped a few beats :) You've done it again and I want to cuddle you for being so awesome...ALAS I miss GRI<3 T^T

ah well, I suppose I can pass the time with some good SuJu/SHINee yaoi fics whilst I wait for more GRI fics ;)

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papersanguine August 13 2010, 06:47:17 UTC
Yay!!! I love that you think angst is adorable!!!~

I love my GRI, but I took a break when i saw that vid with Tabi shoving Seungri. Every little SAW bell and whistle went off and i had to write a fic. It would have been longer and less fluffy if I had more time, but it's nearly two am here and i have to work at 7am!

I'm working on the ending to both my fics, so SOON!! I am seriously on a drought with GRI fics though! Not many fics on the comm lately. Maybe YOU should write one. :D ::hint hint::

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daifukulover August 13 2010, 06:55:11 UTC
That was awesome!!! Thank you very much for sharing your amazing talent!!! <333

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papersanguine August 13 2010, 19:02:26 UTC
::blush:: Thank you for reading!!!

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papersanguine August 14 2010, 19:02:59 UTC
Well, I feel he deserves a happy ending once in a while. :D

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stupidefleurk August 13 2010, 12:21:56 UTC
I can't see the vid :( What Seungri did ?

OMG you enjoy so much to make Seungri suffer in your fics lol you should try "evil Seungri"<3 though he's really cute here (and tabi too,in his own style XD)
I always loved the idea of "touch yourself ,I watch" lol A+ for this part :p

Why are you embarassed by your fluff ?Just yersteday I was rereading the first part of Unwanted Affection :3

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papersanguine August 13 2010, 19:01:09 UTC
I think it was the rap scene from TabiRi's movie "19". The vid goes something like,

Seunghyun gets involved in a rap battle. Other rapper goes for a while, then he goes (with a kick ass rap of course!) then the other rapper again. They go back and forth until Seunghyun seems to freeze. The crowd boos and Seungri rushed up and steals the mic from his hand and says something (I don't speak Korean so i have no idea). TOP looks SUPER embarrassed and shoves him a couple times while looking like he wants to hide. The crowd boos again and Ri hands the mic back. Seunghyun yells at him loudly and shoves him pretty hard off the stage.

He goes back to rap again and YAY! it's just awesome. Seungri comes back on stage and claps while smiling for his hyung. Seunghyun yells at him again (he looks REALLY angry!) and shoves him once more. Then the girl from the movie comes up and all three run away together.

/end

I wonder why you can't see the video. It still works for me. <--sad for you ( ... )

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ta_tow August 14 2010, 01:53:20 UTC
It's because she linked to the post and not the actual video, you have to be a member to see the post.
Here's the actual video link though:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-1aEzUdodQE

:D

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papersanguine August 14 2010, 04:07:06 UTC
Oops, my bad Sophie!!!

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hiroyukishinji August 13 2010, 20:44:55 UTC
HOLY. FREAKING. CRAP. O.O

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papersanguine August 13 2010, 22:50:59 UTC
Ooooh! Wide eyed? YAY!!!!

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