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In The Wrong Pt 7

May 22, 2010 18:49

Title: "In the Wrong" 7/10
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst
Warning: Mild swearing, some language not suitable for children. Hell this whole fic isn't suitable for children.
Summary: Seungri tried so hard. So why did it feel that no matter what happened he always ended up in the wrong ( Read more... )

seungri, tabiri, fanfiction, gri, angst, g-dragon

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papersanguine May 24 2010, 02:17:23 UTC

Wow, thanks!

aishiteru_amie May 23 2010, 01:01:33 UTC

one thing is right about this.
maknae's is ji's!
he even shouted about it so many times before.
this is totally angst.
how broken can ji be?
and the only solace he really want is actually from seungri.
but he just didn't know how to handle the feeling.
they are all victims of love.

papersanguine May 24 2010, 00:31:07 UTC

Wow, you summed up everything perfectly!!!

aishiteru_amie May 24 2010, 12:08:18 UTC

auww..
u're the awesome one!
i can't wait for the next chappie.
hopefully, i could read a g-ri without the angsty feeling soon.
kekeke!

peligr0 May 23 2010, 02:25:49 UTC

awwww ji TT_TT...

papersanguine May 24 2010, 00:30:28 UTC

Aw, i'm sorry to make you sad!! I promise it'll get better!

g_odalisque13 May 23 2010, 02:34:11 UTC

um...i ran out of angsty looking GD icons, so...this happened. lol.

but anyway, i love this. so fucking much. i'm happy that i caught up, but now i have no more to read :(

and poor Jiyong! i hope someone is able to help him.

“Maknae’s mine.” He whispered.
loved this ♥

i can't wait for the next update!

papersanguine May 23 2010, 02:36:21 UTC

I kinda love the ::Yum, Come Here Ri:: icon!!!!

Haha i planned to use that line before I even started that chapter. It took me two hours of rewriting to get it to fit, so i'm SUPER glad you liked it!!!

g_odalisque13 May 23 2010, 02:40:36 UTC

haha. i will forever think that when i look at my icon now XD

do you mind if i add you? i just assumed we already were b/c i think you've commented on something of mine before and i commented on your hooker!Ji fic, but i realized that we are not. lol.

papersanguine May 23 2010, 19:15:07 UTC

Um, heck yea! I love making new friends!

I think there are worse things than looking at sexy!ji pics and thinking inappropriate thoughts about the maknae. ;D

parkchoongjae May 23 2010, 03:05:12 UTC

winner: "Seungri knew it was just the alcohol talking but his heart still swelled with an uncomfortable surge of hopedesirelove." <333

OMG. I am loving this one.

and poor jiyong. T______T

papersanguine May 24 2010, 00:29:56 UTC

Oh shit, i didn't even realize it said "uncomfortable" until just now. haha, i thought i wrote uncontrollable. HAHAH oops.

Thank you once again for reading!!