In the Wrong

[papersanguine]

Title: "In the Wrong" 1/10
Author:Andie
Rating: NC-17 That's right, there's smut here people!
Genre: Angsty-Smut (for right now)
Summary: Seungri tried so hard. So why did it feel that no matter what happened he always ended up in the wrong?

Comments

[vaneszikkipower]

Sometimes i just want to slap Ji for acting like he does!!
It's all you fault here Jiyong!
Arh!!!

Ri I will take you in my arms and comfort you poor baby!

[papersanguine]

Ri's so lucky to have so many people who want to snuggle him when Ji's mean!! Thanks!

[vaneszikkipower]

Yeah that's for sure lol
You're welcome.

[kwonjiyongvips]

Panic suddenly filled his stomach as he watched Jiyong stroke himself. That was going to go inside-? Oh hell no.
“No way! It’s not going to fit!” He whispered harshly. Shuffling backwards he almost made it to the headboard before Jiyong grabbed his hair and knelt to push them flush together.
-- scared!ri

Jiyong slid his fingers back into his hair and led his mouth onto his length. It was salty and Ri didn’t know what to do besides copy what Ji had done to him. Unsure, he slowly swirled his tongue around the length and sucked softly.
^^ That's my favourite part!

[papersanguine]

Oh wow, when i read it back in short dirty parts like that i feel so embarrassed! Thanks for replying!

[kwonjiyongvips]

Oh, just one thing please, Don't rush this story, I'm not saying that you are doing it, but just DONT do it, understand? .. Please let it stay this good D: I really like Ji yong's character, really.

[papersanguine]

That was actually a very helpful comment. I was thinking of wrapping it up in like two more chapts but it keeps feeling so forced. I'll think i'll take your advice. :)

[g_odalisque13]

why have i not been reading this? i love it so far!
well, i certainly am now!
so i'm off to read the other chapters now :)

[papersanguine]

Haha, I dunno? Do you have a life outside of GRI? Cause i sure dont. :D Haha thank you for reading!!!