run on

[paperhouse]

The sentence that runs, as if from death, exhausted and sweat-beaded, torn by blackberry thorns, bloody dust on its knees, each misspelling a shudder of breath, each comma a banana peel in a cartoon scene, how it gets up and continues through the canned laughter, ringing with all it has collected and let go of, as the old man pulling the great fish

Comments

[dictatorcari]

that's lovely!

[saysdances]

the rain that falls into the ocean at night

[onfrowning]

panting.

[paperhouse]

enjoying your entries much these days

[onfrowning]

so glad!

[circadian]

ah! yes! i love it!

[paperhouse]

thanks miss..i'll get back to you on your poems soon.

[spicktastic]

Niiice, especially from "a black spot" onward.

[paperhouse]

hey, you've been giving good sentence lately. keep it up.

[spicktastic]

Gracias señor raoul.