small love scene

[paperhouse]

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he said which hand
and she touched the one that
did not have the ring

then kissed his open palm

*

Comments

[dictatorcari]

awww, that's beautiful. this is my favorite one in a while. :)

[summerstorms]

have we ever discussed how i adore you?

[paperhouse]

less talk, more rock!

gutterhead

[scribble]

I keep thinking "man, this would be one different poem without the last line."

Re: gutterhead

[paperhouse]

i wanted to note that the other palm started to bleed a bit but that complicates things, maybe. anyways, not really a poem, just a sidenote.

also, if i ever come to your door asking for your blessing please feel free to punch me in the face

[parisforayear]

Hello there! I found your journal at random somehow, bored and clicking through friends' friends pages in search of something wonderful (like always). And your journal is wonderful. I love your writing! Just wondering if I might befriend you?

xo

[paperhouse]

you don't need to ask, thats fine.
and thanks.
xo

[deusexbeginning]

some nights when I'm sad I just like to go to the archives on this journal and read a few poems. i thought you'd like to know, it helps a lot.