"I Nothing But To Please His Fantasy", Torchwood, Jack/John. Read at your own peril

[paperclipbitch]

Title: I Nothing But To Please His Fantasy
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing: Jack/John
Challenge/Prompt: philosophy_20 #15. Infinity
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 8610
Genre: Slash
Copyright: Title is from Othello by Mr William Shakespeare.
Warnings: Mild spoilers for 2x01 and 2x05, smut, bondage, violence, non-con, torture, and a slightly creepy Jack/Gray implication

Comments

[elyssadc]

Holy fucking shit. That, my love, is a masterpiece. Of COURSE John is who Jack made him. Oh, Jack. You sick, sick fuck.

“And this coming from the man who raped me while I cried with his brother’s name on his mouth,” you respond dully. “Don’t start throwing stones here, love, ‘cause I’ll always win.”

Best line EVER. This story is now canon and makes the entire Jack/John plotline about 80000000000 times more awesome than it already was. Oh, how deliciously perverse.

[paperclipbitch]

I can never resist making Jack really fucking crazy/sociopathic/psychopathic so the results are always interesting ;)

I was trying to make it tie in, this is definitely my own personal canon now... *grins*

Thanks so very much sweetie.

xxx

[maggie33]

Great story. I love the idea of John being innocent (more or less) before meeting Jack and Jack making him the amoral bastard he is today.

Remembering, glancing back, you screamed and cried and you’d never had a cock up your arse before he pulled you open and cracked you apart. He said: I can tell we’re going to be very good friends.

You wondered: if this is how he treats his friends then what the fuck does he do to his enemies? But you found out soon enough and wished that you hadn’t.

“Without you, I’d go mad,” he says, tipping the bottle over. Alcohol splashes your trousers and you smirk at him.

“You’re mad already,” you reply. He’s mad and he’s driven you over the edge. You never wanted him. You didn’t want to do this, but now you’re so used to it you sometimes wonder whose idea it was the first time.

You write dark so well, Kohl. And I love it.

[paperclipbitch]

I'm so glad you liked honey!

*facepalm* Once I go dark, I can't temper it, it just keeps getting worse and worse. I mean, the results are interesting nonetheless, but...

Thanks very much *hugs*

xxx

[valderys]

Wow. Oh Jack - did you forget what goes around comes around? In this universe, he fucking deserves everything he's going to get.

And what a great use of second person - I've struggled a bit with handling the name issue too - because we know that neither name is correct, and this was a fantastic way to deal with it. It's a hard style to write in and I think you've done brilliantly.

[paperclipbitch]

Well, I figured I'd try and create a mean backstory for the boys as an explanation as to why they both act the way they do...

Thanks so much honey!

xxx

[sueworld2003]

Oh I just loved this!

Jack 'made' John, in a similar way that Angel 'made' Spike. Both being the center of the others universe, and morally warping them in the process.

Excellent idea. I shall be pimping this on my lj if thats okay.

[paperclipbitch]

No, by all means, I'm honoured :) *blushes*

Glad you liked honey, and thank you very much!

xxx

Wow.

[anonymous]

That was absolutely amazing. I'm keeping this saved in my favourites to read over and over. You've made the Jack/John story even more interesting.
You are a fantastic writer; keep it up.