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paperclipbitch

"I'm lost; I can't tell where you end and I begin..."

Nov 26, 2007 14:09

Title: Postcards To No Man’s Land
Fandom: CSI:NY
Pairing: Danny/Peyton [Peyton/Mac, Danny/Lindsay]
Challenge/Prompt: alphabetasoup, D is for Dragon
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Het
Spoilers: Set post the season 3 finale, “Snow Day”.
Copyright: Tori Amos, “Dragon”.
Summary: Danny is broken, and Peyton makes her choice.
Author’s Notes: I wrote this in purple fountain ( Read more... )

pairing: mac/peyton, character: sheldon hawkes, challenge: alphabetasoup, tv show: csi:ny, character: mac taylor, character: danny messer, character: peyton driscoll, character: sid hammerback, pairing: lindsay/danny, pairing: danny messer/peyton driscoll, type: het

Comments 6

jessie_menken November 26 2007, 18:57:46 UTC

Ooh. Love the broken-ness of this, and the rapport between Sid and Peyton. I like the backstory you've hinted at - I could definitely see her coming from money.

paperclipbitch November 27 2007, 16:15:59 UTC

Thank you :) I'm sure she must come from money; you don't get accents like that without it! ;)

xx

karaokegal November 26 2007, 23:46:06 UTC

Can't wait to read this. You are the only one who can make Brit!chick the slightest bit tolerable.

paperclipbitch November 27 2007, 16:16:41 UTC

I'm getting a soft spot for her inspite of myself. Even though her accent makes my teeth hurt because no one talks like that! Hope you like it when you do read, sweetie.

xx

karaokegal November 28 2007, 23:42:32 UTC

MMMMMMMM. Great angst all around, and I think Danny/Peyton works really well because it's so stringent, no hint of softness or fluff and you KNOW how happy that makes me. I also concur with love for your Sid because Sid is made of awesome and needs more fic on his own as well as more appearances like this. I even think Peyton/Sheldon had some potential if he ever got really tired of the brat routine and decided to push her up against something.

Another gem for my collection.

paperclipbitch November 29 2007, 11:58:40 UTC

no hint of softness or fluff and you KNOW how happy that makes me

I think that's why I like writing it so much. I don't have to make any of it ok.

I even think Peyton/Sheldon had some potential if he ever got really tired of the brat routine and decided to push her up against something.
Thank you for the most awesome mental image I've had in days. I have got to write that!

I'm glad you liked :D

xxx