Comments | paperclipbitch: "I was had at the doorstep, played like a two to a four set..."

paperclipbitch

"I was had at the doorstep, played like a two to a four set..."

Jun 04, 2007 12:08

Title: Cream-Coloured Ponies (And Crisp Apple Strudel)
Fandom: House MD
Characters: House, Cuddy
Challenge/Prompt: 100_prompts, 007. Cut
Rating: PG
Genre: Gen
Copyright: Title taken from The Sound Of Music.
Summary: The world’s most complicated car journey.
Author’s Notes: Set the morning after “Words And Deeds”. Because although there’s loads of other ( Read more... )

tv show: house md, character: lisa cuddy, challenge: 100_prompts, character: greg house, type: gen

Comments 13

maddoggirl June 4 2007, 15:21:44 UTC

This was really, really good - even reading it made me feel awkward. I'd like to see you write more gen, because you're great at it.

"Cameron is attempting to prove she’s a strong, independent woman-”
That was my favourite line :D

paperclipbitch June 5 2007, 11:58:01 UTC

Thank you very much - awkward was the thing I was going for. And I intend to experiment with gen, because that's strangely addictive...

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paperclipbitch June 5 2007, 12:00:33 UTC

Awww. *pats*

Thank you :) Cuddy needs to get retribution of some kind, House was so cruel to her!

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karaokegal June 4 2007, 17:10:51 UTC

It's a good thing the Desk Of Doom is not busy this morning because now that you're posting again, I really have no interest in anything but reading what the last few episodes have given you and marveling. For me W&D led to H/Cam unity in "Revelations" only because I was in a seriously wretched mood.

You manage to do more with Cuddy's clicking heels than most writers can do with a bucket of over-blown metaphors.

paperclipbitch June 5 2007, 12:06:05 UTC

*grins* What else is work for, right? ;) (I write a lot at mine. Then occasionally leave what I've done behind for my coworkers to look at in a confused fashion).

Will go look at "Revelations", cuz yay. :)

Thank you so much. That makes me feel very happy!

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leiascully June 4 2007, 17:59:55 UTC

Mmmm. Mmmm. I love the bits about House not being on first name basis with himself and the bars of rehab being made of obligation. Delicious.

paperclipbitch June 5 2007, 12:09:49 UTC

Thank you so much honey :) Glad you liked!

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goddesspharo June 4 2007, 19:26:48 UTC

And House never learns from things that don’t scar him.
I love that line so much!

Very nice job :).

paperclipbitch June 5 2007, 12:13:03 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

xx