"if your heart is a bad, bad thing." Original/RPS (IDK)

[paperclipbitch]

Title: if your heart is a bad, bad thing.
Fandom: Original/RPS
Pairing: Nick Hoult/Lucas Till
Rating: PG-15
Word Count: 10,260
Genre: Slash
Copyright: Title taken from Voodooised by Empires.
Disclaimer: THIS REALLY, REALLY, REALLY DID NOT HAPPEN.
Warnings: Drugs and alcohol abuse, fucking horrible sadness? IDK.
Summary: AU. Caleb rolls his eyes. “

Comments

[myrimidryad]

Okay, more composed now. ^^

Okay, firstly, for every X-Men Havok/Beast, Lucas/Nicolas, whatever fic you write, I think you should do an accompanying piece based on Caleb/Banshee/whoever. He's freaking amazing! XD I love where Lucas asks for some of whatever makes him so fucked up and suddenly he wakes up in hospital. ^^

This is definitely a piece of work worthy of pride. :) The build up with Nick's poetry and stories making people cry, Lucas not getting why sex wasn't so fun any more, oh my god the scene at the party where Nick started crying and Caleb had to step in, the scene in the pottery class and Nick taking Lucas to the lecture I presume Charles was taking? ^^ All so perfect and wonderful and it all went together so well, and, and, and damn you! It's beautiful! :') There is more, but I'd end up telling you your own story blow by blow, so I'll leave it there. ^^

[fannyt]

This is gorgeous.

I have no idea who these people are and I don't care because this whole piece is just lovely, lovely, lovely. And kind of terrifying and really really painful.

I don't have a lot of words left, so: ♥

[flwrpwr_vampyre]

I have too many feelings about this. I had to stop in the middle and do actual real world things and I nearly died.

Also I have to say that your disclaimer about Caleb Landry Jones made me go look him up and oh, yes please to all of that.

[manyfacesofme22]

I have no idea who these people are but I love them. And you. How are you able to make drug addiction and anonymous sex mixed with teenage lols elegant?

[tokene]

This is so utterly heart-wrecking and beautiful in all the ways which words can't quite express, and yet you were able to do it, to phrase those achingly real moments into words which just flowed like pure poetry.

Not much to say, because all the lovely readers and commenters before me already did, but I am just utterly floored by this fic of yours. You most definitely should be proud of it. I love your writing, and hope that one day I can write like you.