"Shut Up And Let Me See Your Jazz Hands", MCR RPS (Killjoys 'verse), Frank/Gerard

[paperclipbitch]

Title: Shut Up And Let Me See Your Jazz Hands
Fandom: My Chemical Romance RPS (Killjoys 'verse)
Pairing: Frank/Gerard [implied past Pete/Mikey]
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3855
Genre: Slash
Disclaimer: The fabulous killjoys and all their fabulousness belong to My Chemical Romance, and My Chemical Romance belong to themselves, and I don't own anything

Comments

[northernveil]

Beautiful. This universe inspires so much good fic.

[paperclipbitch]

I know, I love reading Killjoys fic! Thanks lovely :)

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[noxnoctisanima]

I love you forever and ever for this. You are made of awesome and sunshine and win. :D

[paperclipbitch]

Awww *blushes* Thank you so much sweetie!

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[yan_tan_tether]

Ohhhhh, I like this a lot. I love that they taught her to read from Watchmen!

[paperclipbitch]

Thank you! I couldn't resist the idea of teaching the kid to read from something awesome by Alan Moore...

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[merelyn]

THIS IS AWESOME. I loved the comic book conceit, I loved Gerard's POV, and how you teased out his life Before. Other things I adored include the t-shirt, and the Gerard/Frank stuff, and Mikey and Ray and The Girl being raised on the radio and ALL THE THINGS. Beautifully done, darling. ♥

[paperclipbitch]

It's a relief to hear you say that because I really wasn't sure about the comic book thing; I wanted it but I didn't know if it worked! Thank you so much lovely, I'm glad you liked :D

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[allyndra]

I love that the bits they've given us in the video are enough to spawn such vivid worlds of fic. Your version of the Killjoys feels really solid and believable. This:Gerard rips a poster of himself off the wall; he's dark-haired, before he learned that power came from colour, and he kind of wants Korse to update his Wanted posters, though that isn't one of those things you can really request. is completely awesome.

Mikey's near-silence is powerful, and the backstory with Pete is effective. Ray and The Girl are fantastic, as is the way they're raising her. I would have trouble not falling in love with your Frank (although that's often a problem for me. He's easy to fall for). I dig the idea of the words on his t-shirt sticking in the back of Gerard's mind, even if they didn't meet.

Minor note: I was was running before I was running has the "was" repeated.

Also, Americans don't use the word biro. It would be ballpoint pen.

[paperclipbitch]

Thanks for the typo heads-up, I thought I'd caught everything but clearly not. And... I did not know that about biro before so there, I have learned something :)

Seriously, though, thank you so much! I was a little nervous about this one so I'm really pleased you enjoyed :D

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