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Title: I Need You So Much Closer
Rating: PG
Pairing: Rodney McKay/John Sheppard
Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Word Count: 950
Notes: My first time writing SGA fic and my first time posting to a community. 
           Uhm, it's a little angsty? Not beta'd, roughly edited. Title from a Death Cab for Cutie song (Transatlanticism) Also, Rodney gets kidnapped a lot?

Comments

[goddess47]

Awwww....

the beeping of Rodney's heart monitor chasing him out.

Yes, that would be how John felt....

Nicely done... come back and play some more!

[paper_creations]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[zoemathemata]

I love hurt!Rodney!
And I especially love John cuddling with him in the infirmary!

[paper_creations]

I gotta say, I'm a sucker for hurt!Rodney as well. Especially when he has John to fuss over him :) Thanks!

[ami_ven]

Very nice! I especially like the backwards-timeline.

[paper_creations]

Thank you! I was trying to do something different, so I'm glad you liked it :)

[spazlady2002]

Oh, I love this. I liked the before and after. Tho I would have liked it with the one that breaks your heart first, but it's good either way.

Thank you for sharing this lovely piece of work. Awesome job!!!

[paper_creations]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

I mostly did it the way it is because I put the better section first. But! It makes the sad bit better because you know it works out alright :)

[nodakgirl]

I love this. I love the heartbreak in the before because I know that they will get what they need and want. The after is so sweet to watch them being so much in love that Rodney can't sleep without John in bed with him...even when he's under the influence of pain killers. Nice job.

[paper_creations]

* flail hands* Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)