Comments | paolaadara: Tonight, They Sin (OHSHC fanfiction)

paolaadara

Tonight, They Sin (OHSHC fanfiction)

Aug 27, 2008 03:20

Title: Tonight, They Sin (1 of 1)

Author: Paola

Disclaimer: Tonight, They Sin is based on characters and situations that belong to Bisco Hatori (and other production affiliates that have the right of ownership). No money is being made, and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.

Considerations: Similarities to other stories/events/passages ( Read more... )

ouran high school host club, hikaru, ouran, hitachiin, kaoru, yaoi, hikaoru, hitachiin twins, ohshc, fanfiction, hitachiincest, hikaru/kaoru

Comments 34

lovestyle August 26 2008, 20:37:28 UTC

Oooh not only can you write, but you write TWINCEST. This was beautiful. I love it- you're incredibly talented. :D

paolaadara August 26 2008, 20:52:00 UTC

thanks! glad you liked it!

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paolaadara August 27 2008, 00:40:56 UTC

thank YOU for reading!

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paolaadara August 27 2008, 00:46:21 UTC

wow thanks for reviewing! "seductive and sensual," i like that, and it's real nice that you think the composition makes it so that readers feel they are in on a very intimate secret, and in hikaoru's case, something sinful.

raffi August 26 2008, 21:32:56 UTC

The last line was amazing~ You write so beautifully!

paolaadara August 27 2008, 00:52:47 UTC

thanks! i write because i can't draw. lol. i'm waiting for more of your fanart! ;p

raffi August 27 2008, 05:55:34 UTC

<3 Awww!~ I will post some today or on Thursday.

yurameki_tenshi August 26 2008, 21:36:38 UTC

x3333 That was incredibly well written~ I loved it!

<3

paolaadara August 27 2008, 00:57:34 UTC

glad you think so!