Take a Deep Breath (And Count to Ten)

[backtograce]

Title: Take a Deep Breath (And Count to Ten).
Fandom: Red Eye.
Characters: Jackson Rippner/Lisa Reisert.
Rating: PG-13, for implications of some ~kinky things~.
Word Count: 356.
Spoilers: Just assume there are some for the movie, okay?
Summary: She has nightmares far too often now and they’re always about him.

Comments

[fiddlings]

Jenny, Jenny, Jenny. THIS WAS FANTASTIC. Seriously. Your words are so beautiful; I love Jackson/Lisa so incredibly much, and you captured them and their love/fear/hate balance perfectly. ♥

[backtograce]

Awe, thanks so much! I saw some terrible icons that someone made of them and this is what came of it. :D

[fiddlings]

LOL. Well, hey, at least something good came of them. :D Now I feel better about my early icon efforts; maybe they at least inspired someone!

[whomever]

First of all: the fact that you justified this makes it hot right off the bat.

Secondly, even if you didn't justify it, YOU'RE GONNA RUIN MY LCD SCREEN WITH ALL THIS HEAT. DAMN. All of it, ALL OF IT, especially this:

His hand against her throat is now erotic, leaving just enough of an airway for her to beg for what she wants.

I seriously love it when you write Jackson/Lisa. You get it so pitch perfect!

[backtograce]

afahgfksagk

LOVE YOU SFM. &hearts I DON'T WANNA RUIN YOUR SCREEN, THOUGH. Also, I'm so glad that you're with me on the totally-hot-choking bit. :D

YAH!

[zagethe]

Red Eye FF. There's just not enough of it. If I ever could get my act together I would post. (I think I have about 20 pages) It's hard being a non-linear writer LOL..

This is awesome and this line (love love) "his eyes, so blue she’s afraid of the ocean now," is just so many ways of win!

Re: YAH!

[backtograce]

... You have 20 pages of Red Eye fanfic? That's amazing. Also, you should check out radiocakes' fanfic over at her comm. (Here's the Red Eye tag for you. She's only written two pieces for the film, but they're amazing.)

Thanks! I really like it, too. :D

Re: YAH!

[zagethe]

Yep, right here on my laptop... Ohh kewl, I already read the kitchen one but I'm going to read the other right now.

Re: YAH!

[backtograce]

That's a lot of fanfic. I wish I could bust out that much -- I've got the plot idea in my head, it just won't come out.

[andshehopes]

ughughugh ♥ i'm a huge jackson/lisa shipper. there was just way too much chemistry, man!

this was so good. i have this tiny, tiny collection of GOOD red eye fic saved on my computer and this is def. going into that folder :)

[backtograce]

Awe, really? :D I'm glad it made it into that folder!

[seren_ccd]

This is fantastic! Sensual, hot, with just enough of a dash of creepy thrown in to give it that edge. Awesome!

[backtograce]

Thank you so much!