Just Want to be Loved

May 27, 2012 00:13


Title: Just Want to be Loved
Pairing: Key × Jonghyun
Summary: “You’ll still be my best friend no matter what, Jjong. And I’ll still be yours.” Jonghyun took that very seriously, and was devastated when Kibum broke up their friendship when he came out to him at the mere age of thirteen. He had been disowned by his parents almost an hour earlier - and ( Read more... )

media: fanfic, length: oneshot, fandom: shinee, pairing: key × jonghyun, rating: nc-17

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pandragonriyong May 26 2012, 16:15:09 UTC
IS THIS THE REALITY YOU WANTED?! xDDD ♥♥♥
hitoshisakurai :3

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;ASGAHFAFAHOIGHAIOGHNAL hitoshisakurai May 26 2012, 16:48:25 UTC
OMG I'LL TELL YOU WHEN I READ IT OMG♥♥♥

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Re: ;ASGAHFAFAHOIGHAIOGHNAL hitoshisakurai May 26 2012, 17:23:27 UTC
OH HOLY SHIT WHAT IS AIR I KINDA NEED TO CALM DOWN WAIT A MINUTE I NEED SOME COFFE OR IDK TO OPEN THE WINDOW OH SHIT

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Re: ;ASGAHFAFAHOIGHAIOGHNAL hitoshisakurai May 26 2012, 18:08:39 UTC
Okay, so where do I even begi--ah, yes.
I LOVE YOU.
Now that we stated that, we can move on. Omg.
So um yeah thanks God you said it's going to be a twoshot 'cause otherwise I'd just idk curl up under my blanket and weep. Really.
But let's start with the beginning OH MY GOSH JJONG WAE YOU LIKE ME XD
I mean...when he was describing his dream-guy, the one that would have both masculine and feminine features. He's so like me, wanting to convey all the good things of both genders in one person... if there were more such people... /le sigh
Okay, so the beginning of their friendship is the cutest thing ever and I was kinda squealing mentally when reading it >W<
But then I knew something must have happened if in the beginning they're apart... so, when it came to that scene when Jjong was about to come out to him and Key told him that no matter what he'll still be his best friend, I was kinda melting actually, expecting understanding and so on...
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BUT.

"Kibum had stared at him back then with wide eyes, before letting go of him ( ... )

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hanabi333 May 26 2012, 18:44:40 UTC
Why do I feel like JongKey's roles in this oneshot should have been reversed? But whatever, it's your oneshot and it's freaking good anyway.

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pandragonriyong May 29 2012, 12:58:06 UTC
First of all, thanks for reading! ^ ^

Second, well, this is actually a fic for someone's birthday, and she wanted lots of angst, and top!Key. Since it was for her birthday, I couldn't deny it. But yes, this kind of fic seems for fitting if their roles are switched ^ ^U

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rayflo May 26 2012, 23:47:26 UTC
I was seriously about to weep and scream at the ending, but then I read you A/N, that it's a twoshot. >.<
This was so sad. Angsty, right. :(
But i'm really glad, the next part will be fluffy. Yay for happy ending! Can't wait to read it. ^^

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pandragonriyong May 29 2012, 13:02:12 UTC
Well, I didn't real feel anything writing this, more like proud of myself for finishing it in two days, but that's about it. I'm glad I was able to get such a reaction from you xD

Um, it might not be too fluffy, because there still needs to be a bit of angst in the beginning for the plot to flow properly, but there still will be so ... watch out for that? xD

Thanks for reading :D

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choi_minju May 27 2012, 01:58:03 UTC
......you come back with angsty smut?
I seriously loved the plot and everything, but......
*glares at Key*
WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU DO TO HIM, YOU BITCH.
Kibum took away Jonghyun's virginity!
And he didn't even love him! The fuck is this?!
I would've loved some sequel of Taemin ending up with Jonghyun or something, but the fuck?!
The ending - ALKSJFSHGALKFGFJK!
*chik-chak*
*holding shotgun* Imma kill Key.

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choi_minju May 27 2012, 02:00:48 UTC
SO....... I can't help but notice the A/N after I posted the previous comment.
......please let there be a JongTae.
Give happiness to Jonghyun, or I will reign terror in your house. >:(

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pandragonriyong May 29 2012, 13:04:18 UTC
IT WAS A REQUEST DARLING >:D *still haven't forgotten your JongHo request to me xD*

Hmm ... this was written for someone's birthday, so let me ask her (or him, I still dk @.@) if it's okay that I include JongTae :D

Ofc I'll make him loved! >:O He has HoMin to smother him with it xD

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choi_minju May 30 2012, 18:57:18 UTC
Oh....never mind then.... *slinks away with the gun*
LOL you don't know the gender of the requester.
(Oh hey, that rhymed.)
Doesn't HAVE to be JongTae, as long as he is loved! ;~;

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kii_chu May 27 2012, 08:12:04 UTC
umm spot..

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kii_chu May 27 2012, 16:43:45 UTC
*crying my heart out*
How could Key pretending to be drunk then took advantage of Jonghyun like that?!! Oh, poor Jonghyunnie... T________T

Kibum sighs and leans back, his head touching the wall as he stroked Jonghyun’s hair. “I’m sorry, Jjong,” he says quietly. “I’ve always known you love me. You were too obvious.”
I thought he loves him back but then he said that he isn't gay. Then why Key, why di you do that to Jonghyun???

*sobs

Looking forward for the second part, please make it happy ending...

btw, I'm glad that you write Jongkey again^^

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pandragonriyong May 29 2012, 13:17:03 UTC
He has his reasons :)

Ofc I will, as much as I love angst, angsty JongKey is too much T_T

Thank you :) And thanks for reading♥ :D

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