Wow momma, lookit what I did!

[pandorablu]

Title: Hospitality
Author: jennaraven
Rating: pg-13
Pairings: implied Cassie/Dean, Sam/Dean
State: Mississippi
Spoilers: tiny ones for Route 666, Devil's Trap and Pilot
Feedback: Wouild be really really cool. Especially in this weather.
Notes: Done for the spn_50states challenge. Never actually done a SPN fic before, so it's new territory for me. Also in a

Comments

[lyra_wing]

Okay, I just read through this and I really enjoyed it! You've got the Sam and Dean voices down, and I would REALLY love to see you write more SPN fic! The whole thing was a great, a good ghost story...

But this?

It’s 3 am and a moonbeam travels across the room, glinting off the knife that rests under one pillow and exposes one of the numerous circles of salt that lie around the windows and doors. The comforter has been pushed off, and as the beam reaches the bed, one body rolls to the other side, shying away. A hand reaches over and pulls the body close, unconsciously looking for skin-to-skin contact. A shirt rises up, and the hand palms the side, exposing the bottom of a protection sigil etched into skin.

This whole paragraph just MAKES it for me. Especially surrounded by non-Sam/Dean scenes, it just becomes that much more powerful. Do you know what I mean?

Great job. Excellent first fic for SPN, I have to say. :)

[pandorablu]

Thanks. First fic in a new fandom, I'm never sure if I have the voices down, so yay! Never one to jump in feet first with the sex scenes either, so I wanted the Sam/Dean to be there, but not be too explicit.

[katbcoll]

Oh wow! I'd just read about the Devil's Punch Bowl and Murrell too! So this really kinda brought the boring stuff I'd read alive. *blinks* Okay, so as alive as a ghost story can be. *smirks*

The part Lyra pointed out? Dude, ditto for me! I could really see all that in my head. It was WONDERFUL!!!

I can't wait to see what else you come up with in this fandom.

[pandorablu]

*bounces* I love more feedback.

I didn't want to do your classic haunted house story (since gods knows the South has a bunch) so I'm glad the Punch Bowl worked out as well as it did.

And wow, I didn't think everyone would like that Sam/Dean scene so much. *beams*