I had to go back and reread some before I could make a coherent comment. I love this fic so much. It's painful and beautiful to read - and to watch - Roy slowly erode away. Yet whether he realizes it or not, he seems to be coming back stronger each time. I hope Ed can do the same.
The vibe I'm getting is Ed has determined to sacrifice himself completely in order to restore Al. Being obnoxious to everyone now is a way of making the upcoming loss easier. If I'm right, I sure hope you have a happier ending than the one Ed is planning.
You did a great job on showing the horrible grinding stress of that roller coaster between hope and fear. I also like how Ed brightens and dims with his mood and the situation, and how fragile Roy is. I always liked that Roy looks tough but is a mess inside, whereas Ed could be dismissed as a crippled kid if you didn't know he was solid steel inside. They compliment each other so well.
You have no idea how tempted I am to say something regarding your reading of the characters. But I can't- everything is about to come to a head very soon, and there are only a few chapters left in the story anyway, so anything I say would probably be a spoiler. So I will just chuckle wickedly and tell you that all things will come clear in time.
(that's really no help, is it?)
What an interesting comparison between Roy and Ed you make! I hadn't thought of it that way, but that is a perfect description of them. And explains a lot about why I find them so well matched (and can only reluctantly pair them with other characters). And Al... yeah, I bet he does have some idea. He's always known Ed better than Ed knows himself. (and damned if he doesn't outsmart Roy and I both on a regular basis!!)
But thank you for reading and for the kind words, and I am so glad that this story has a place in your heart. That is really the best compliment of all. <3
They really are a mess, aren't they? And neither one of them is anything like equipped to deal with their problems in a healthy manner. It probably shouldn't be so fun to write these boys in such a trainwreck, but it really is.
I'm so glad you liked it. A lot of work went into this chapter, and it's hugely gratifying to see that it's paying off. Thank you for reading, and for commenting!
^_^ He said it! Roy actually said "I love you"! squeee! I was afraid that he wouldn't but he did. <3 Ed's response is as expected tho. :) You know, when I first read this, specifically the part about Ed pulling himself away from everyone, I was of the opinion that he was doing it because he feared that the price he'd have to pay to get Al back would be him losing himself and he didn't want those around him hurt by the loss but now I see that he's doing it so HE'S not the one being hurt. Ed is altruistic but only to a point I see. *wibbles* poor little soul. so much need, so much pain, and so afraid to accept even the tiniest bit of comfort (love?) for it. ;_
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*hides head* Yeah, I know, it took far too long. I'm sorry. But believe it or not, over that time I pulled it out more than once to try and repair. It just took time and finally gaining traction on it. This story is so much more difficult than any others I've written
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I was too shy to comment when you posted your last chapter, but I just wanna tell you that this is one of my favorite fics of all time (I re read the whole thing only a couple of days ago)
Aw, I am like the last person in the world you need to be shy around, believe me! But thank you so much for commenting, and I am really honored that you like my little monster story so much. I hope this chapter will meet your expectations as well. Thank you for reading! :)
<3333 This was well worth the wait, as I mentioned for the last chapter. I would much prefer waiting for however long it takes than for you to be unhappy with any chapter you write.
This installment was amazing. I love how the narrative has shifted, and how Ed is the one that came for Roy. I know it won't be an easy road, and I know nothing about their situation guarantees a happy ending, but what an incredible, brilliant journey it will be.
Aw, thanks, though I sincerely hope I'm able to do much better than a two-year lapse for the next chapter! That's just silly!
Luckily, I'm getting my head back where it needs to be for this story, and I'm so relieved that this chapter resonated for you. These two poor, messed up boys... no, I'm afraid they don't have an easy road at all. But then again, it wouldn't have to be so bad if they could just get their heads straight. They are their own worst enemies, I think.
Thank you so very much for hanging with this story, despite my miserable posting times, and for letting me know what you think about it. I hope that as the story winds to its conclusion, you will continue to enjoy the ride. Thanks for reading!
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The vibe I'm getting is Ed has determined to sacrifice himself completely in order to restore Al. Being obnoxious to everyone now is a way of making the upcoming loss easier. If I'm right, I sure hope you have a happier ending than the one Ed is planning.
You did a great job on showing the horrible grinding stress of that roller coaster between hope and fear. I also like how Ed brightens and dims with his mood and the situation, and how fragile Roy is. I always liked that Roy looks tough but is a mess inside, whereas Ed could be dismissed as a crippled kid if you didn't know he was solid steel inside. They compliment each other so well.
Poor, worried Al. He has to have an inkling.
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(that's really no help, is it?)
What an interesting comparison between Roy and Ed you make! I hadn't thought of it that way, but that is a perfect description of them. And explains a lot about why I find them so well matched (and can only reluctantly pair them with other characters). And Al... yeah, I bet he does have some idea. He's always known Ed better than Ed knows himself. (and damned if he doesn't outsmart Roy and I both on a regular basis!!)
But thank you for reading and for the kind words, and I am so glad that this story has a place in your heart. That is really the best compliment of all. <3
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Damn well done my dear.
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I'm so glad you liked it. A lot of work went into this chapter, and it's hugely gratifying to see that it's paying off. Thank you for reading, and for commenting!
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I was too shy to comment when you posted your last chapter, but I just wanna tell you that this is one of my favorite fics of all time (I re read the whole thing only a couple of days ago)
*goes to read*
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This installment was amazing. I love how the narrative has shifted, and how Ed is the one that came for Roy. I know it won't be an easy road, and I know nothing about their situation guarantees a happy ending, but what an incredible, brilliant journey it will be.
Congratulations on the posting!
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Luckily, I'm getting my head back where it needs to be for this story, and I'm so relieved that this chapter resonated for you. These two poor, messed up boys... no, I'm afraid they don't have an easy road at all. But then again, it wouldn't have to be so bad if they could just get their heads straight. They are their own worst enemies, I think.
Thank you so very much for hanging with this story, despite my miserable posting times, and for letting me know what you think about it. I hope that as the story winds to its conclusion, you will continue to enjoy the ride. Thanks for reading!
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