The Visit (old commentfic)

Jun 11, 2011 23:06

So I was rooting around in my files tonight, looking for something to work on, when I found this little thing I'd written for sister_coyote some time back. It was comment-fic, if I recall correctly; short and fun. So I thought I'd toss it up here, since all my other projects have slowed immensely due to a college semester that is trying to break me ( Read more... )

commentfic, shortfic, fma

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japanimecrazed June 12 2011, 03:34:08 UTC
*lol* I'm glad you unearthed this!

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pandoraculpa June 12 2011, 19:14:18 UTC
*grins* Thanks for reading; I'm glad you enjoyed it! Funny, the things one finds lying around in writing folders... ;)

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evil_whimsey June 12 2011, 16:52:56 UTC
BWAH-hahahahaha this is fantastic, oh god what a great scene.

I'll just be over here, giggling my head off now.

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pandoraculpa June 12 2011, 19:19:28 UTC
*points* See? I *used* to be able to write! That happened in like maybe an hour, tops, so what I want to know is why I can't do that now? Clearly the Muse has scampered off to Aruba, or- no! Dammit, I bet she's still at the cabin! Hmm, I'm gonna have to staple her to my side when we go up there in August. She's really not living up to her end of the bargain right now!

Heh, well, my neuroses aside, I'm glad you liked it! I remember it being fun to write; one of those things you just imagine and then churn out almost in one motion. Man, I love those. So considering how little effort went into it, it's nice that it made you giggle!

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catalog_cats July 7 2011, 03:49:23 UTC
This is glorious. XD
I don't have much else to say, really... except that this is one of the few stories I've read that has actually caused me to burst out laughing while reading it.

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pandoraculpa July 11 2011, 00:10:13 UTC
(apologies for the late reply; thunderstorms knocked out my internet quite a while!)

Aw, thanks, I'm really glad you liked it. It's fun to write humorfic, when the inspiration strikes. Don't really think of myself as a humor writer, but it's nice to know that when I attempt it, it can turn out well. Thanks for reading! :)

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