When the Night Comes In

Mar 09, 2011 06:41

Title: When the Night Comes In
Rating: PG-13ish
Word Count: 3312
Summary: "We're too late." Seemingly unconnected murders are not so random after all, and Riza realizes the terrible choice she will have to make.
Warnings: Character death
Author's Note: Okay, so this is not delicious cake. This is an ugly, nasty little story regurgitated ( Read more... )

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pandoraculpa March 11 2011, 02:37:20 UTC
Hawkeye has always seemed to me to have a deeply ingrained sense of justice and fair play. I can't picture her going out for revenge, but Ed... his passions tend to rule him. And he's seen so many bad things; something like this I can easily imagine hitting a faultline in him, and cracking his heart open.

Thanks for reading, and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :)

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lynx212 March 11 2011, 23:39:11 UTC
OH wow this is just...wow!! Well done, extremely well done

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pandoraculpa March 12 2011, 13:47:46 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for taking the time to drop a comment! :)

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