Comments | pandajono: THIS IS A SONG THAT I CURRNENTLY CALL "THE LOVE SONG". IT'S NOT SPECIFIC, I JUST WROTE IT... RANDOM.

pandajono

THIS IS A SONG THAT I CURRNENTLY CALL "THE LOVE SONG". IT'S NOT SPECIFIC, I JUST WROTE IT... RANDOM.

Aug 26, 2004 23:50

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kachi113 August 26 2004, 20:58:26 UTC

Badly, Jon.

Adverbs are your friend.

Bad sounds better, though.

(Nice song.)

omg11. kellatra August 27 2004, 15:52:15 UTC

oh my god it rhymes.
*worships mad rhyming skill obsessively*
hail almighty rhyming skill.

staplesintheass August 27 2004, 17:58:10 UTC

i like it jono its really good.... still looking for that drawing of amy

and lets see....
sorry for being bossy

in the poem i like everything except ths but now they hurt
"deeply at that
they linger inside
fermenting like wine"

this part sounds weird

other than that GOOD JOB