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Ni~Ya/Sakito - Model Behavior - [9/10]

Mar 12, 2007 16:10

Title - Model Behavior [9/10]
Author - Chieko (Panda Eater)
Rating - Pg-13
Warnings - Language, angst
Pairings - Ni~Ya x Sakito (Nightmare)
Disclaimers - Generic disclaimer rules apply. (Dang.)
Summary - Sakito works as a model in New York, and soon finds himself falling for the new photographer.

( It felt like Sakito’s world crashed around him. )

Comments 10

jibunnohana March 12 2007, 23:54:50 UTC

Ah, I can't believe this is almost over. D: I've enjoyed it very much and was very happy to see the update on my friends page. I hope you'll write more NiSaki in the future~

Aha, and Saki's engrish still gets me. So cute. XD

pandaeater March 15 2007, 05:33:40 UTC

Mmm, yes, I'm acutally surprised with myself that I've actually stuck with this story for so long. XD
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. :3

stupidfxxk March 13 2007, 01:42:45 UTC

*_*;
you should really post this in niyaxsakito ~~~~~ ♥

*trying to finish reading this in one night* *_________* its so lovely ~

pandaeater March 15 2007, 05:35:06 UTC

That's actually a good idea. (0__0)
Ah, thank you for reading. (^__^)

iamzie March 13 2007, 13:16:05 UTC

gawd... that IS so sad.. T______________________T And 9/10.. almost over.. what's gonna happen next?? *shudders* I hope it'll be a good end, but but but.. *shuts up and waits*

pandaeater March 15 2007, 05:35:57 UTC

Yes, yes, almost over. D:
Next chapter is coming soon if I'm not too lazy to write it XD
Thank you for reading. (^w^)

x_lain_x March 13 2007, 16:37:11 UTC

Perfect~

pandaeater March 15 2007, 05:37:12 UTC

Why thank you. :3

(PS, I like your icon. it kills me XD)

glassframe March 16 2007, 22:16:17 UTC

i've been reading this since chapter 1, and i'm gradually getting more comfortable with posting&commenting on eljay - so i will this time.

i can't help but notice how your descriptions improve as the story goes on, it's gotten more descriptive with metaphors and similes. so good job! :D

model-themed stories have always intrigued me for an odd reason (i.e. the devil wears prada), and ni~ya&sakito is my favorite pairing, so i've enjoyed this story.

one thing that slightly quirks me though (if you don't mind of course), is how feminine-like the Americans treat Sakito, wouldn't they have male models for masculine clothing/styles? but that's what AU is, right? so it's not a huge thing.

i want to see more sad things! i love a story with a good sad ending, and sad stories are usually the only books that are part of my favorites. so i might be the few (only?) who doesn't want to see Sakito happy and back with Ni~ya at the end. but a small part of me does want a happy ending. xD

mm, update soon?

pandaeater March 17 2007, 06:08:20 UTC

You've stuck with this thing since chapter one? That makes me very happy to hear that. :3

I've noticed that my descriptions and whatnot have improved as well. I believe that the creative writing unit we did in English helped. Wow, school actually does teach you useful things. XD

As for the model thing... When I think of models I think of gorgeous human beings, both male and female. Sakito's not really 'manly' looking to start with (or maybe that's just my opinion XD), so it's kind of hard to treat him more masculine-like. Or at least that's how I think.

Ignore me, please.

I want the ending to be sort of angsty-happy. That doesn't even make sense. XD I have an idea; now I just need to make it work.

Thank you for reading. I really do appreciate it. (^__^)