"Hit" - Shawn/Lassiter - R - Chapter Two -

Aug 28, 2008 22:37

Title: Hit
Author: panda_god
Pairing: Shassi (Shawn Spencer/ Carlton Lassiter)
Chapter: 2/??
Rating: R for graphic scenes portraying dead bodies, violence, murder, and future sexual content.
Disclaimer: Psych and all it's awesomeness is not mine. I don't make any money from this, in fact I lose money because I don't do my real job while doing this.
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panda_god August 29 2008, 13:57:01 UTC
Nah dude, what's awesome is your icon. Made of win-cakes.

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mask_of_glamour August 29 2008, 05:06:06 UTC
holy shitcakes, dude...i loved this chapter! what i found most interesting about it though was how empathetic and loyal Shawn was to Lassy and Jules...how he wouldn't leave the station until the two of them were relieved of their responsibilities and all...and how he was reading Lassiter's body language through the windows of the Chief's office...also, the scene in the interrogation room was almost intimate, i thought...

update again soon! i'm in love with this fic...=)

Emily

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panda_god August 29 2008, 13:56:10 UTC
Thank you!

The interrogation room scene actually had me the most worried of all! Glad you enjoyed this chapter! I look forward to your feedback on chapter three.

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SQEAL! This chappy is SO made of AWESOME! *~^-^~* mahala_ac August 29 2008, 06:18:51 UTC
Thank you SO much Panda God! You have definitely got me wrapped up TIGHT in this story! Bravo on "Bringing The Reader In"! *BIG HUGLOMP OF OVERWHELMING LUFF* I can't WAIT to read the next exhilarating chappy! ^-~

Sin, Mahala A.C.

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Re: SQEAL! This chappy is SO made of AWESOME! *~^-^~* panda_god August 29 2008, 13:51:03 UTC
XD Thank you!
In all honesty I was a little worried about this one, considered lengthening it and bringing the briefcase in in the next one. But hey, that's what revision is for much later on, after it's finished.

Glad you like!

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admiraljackal August 29 2008, 15:20:58 UTC
This was another great chapter. I loved the fact that Shawn stayed loyal to Lassiter and Juliet. It's very sweet and yet seems like something he would do. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

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panda_god August 29 2008, 19:11:56 UTC
Thanks!

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fearless_jones August 29 2008, 16:22:00 UTC
Awesome! I hope Shawn's in lots of danger, just because I'm sick like that and I want to see him suffer. LOL

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panda_god August 29 2008, 19:13:45 UTC
-evil cackle-
Oh, he will be in danger. Grave, terrible danger.

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fearless_jones August 29 2008, 20:20:11 UTC
sweeeeeeeet. :D

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