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Parallel Reflections "The Past"

May 05, 2007 16:51

Title: The Past
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,279
Notes/Warnings: pre-HBP, severe angst
Summary: If you leave the unknown unexplored, you free yourself to imagine what you may in a place where disappointment doesn’t exist.

( I wonder if she was waving hello or if she was bidding me goodbye. )

one-shot, harry potter, parallel reflections, the past, consequence and redemption

Comments 2

whoa! dianne_37 May 7 2007, 18:00:23 UTC

I don't know what to say about this fic. It's so deep! You've taken the old 'should'a, could'a, would'a and made it into an eloquent study of Harry's memories and what he made of them at the time they occurred. You must have been super inspired the night you wrote this. I really liked the small paragraphs that describe what Ginny was doing, like running behind the train, half laughing, half crying. You kept it very male, too, which in posts like this is hard to do. I'm very impressed!

Re: whoa! palavrae May 7 2007, 19:40:53 UTC

Thanks for your comments! I'm glad to hear that you think it still sounds like Harry, considering my Harry is apparently written in a female style according to the Gender Genie (http://bookblog.net/gender/genie.php) *laughs*. Thanks for reading, D!