One-shot challenge #17 - Alternate Universe

Aug 24, 2010 16:19

Title Tonight, I don't want to walk alone
Author twin_cheeks
Rating PG-13
Warnings Very, very mild spoilers for S1 that aren't actually direct
Word count 3,348
Summary Peter tells a story about what could have been. Written for one-shot challenge #17 @ pairechallenge. Un-beta'd, purely because I can't stick to the time I allocate myself to write these things :/

And when you open your eyes, his gaze locks with yours and you can barely breathe. )

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dauting August 24 2010, 07:12:42 UTC
Gosh. You took this prompt and made it 100x more awesome than I could ever hope of imagining possible. I'm probably exaggerating, but your story has me on a high right now and I really want to let you know how much of an amazing read this was.

This fic is so sweet and adorable and heartbreaking and beautiful. I love how it's Peter who weaves the tale of the AU!Heroes world, overflowing with his dreamer's imagination. Even the ending with Peter and Claire being hopeful that the future may be better is so perfect in the "old Heroes" way that it makes me want to break out into song.

Good luck on the challenge!

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commen_sense August 24 2010, 16:17:59 UTC
oh I LOVED this! It's been so long since I've actually read paire so I was bound to love it anyways but I love the way you've written both of them. great job! :)

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paynesgrey August 24 2010, 21:16:57 UTC
Wow, this is just fantastic. I love the idea behind this, and their dialogue is amazing, and there were a few times I choked up I was so moved.
Brilliant job!

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bellonablack August 24 2010, 23:54:36 UTC
I love this. Because the sentiment of actual love was so real and true in it. This was a really powerful piece. <3 Thanks for writing it.

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