Title: Last but not alone, Space Above and Beyond

[pairatime]

Title: Last but not alone

Comments

[colls]

I'm so glad to see SAAB fic and I love the way you write both West and Hawkes. Very IC. Hawkes is still so unsure about his place in the world and West just sees the whole thing falling apart and unraveling. But between the two of them, they're going to keep it together. *G*

ETA: in case you hadn't thought of it already, you should cross-post this to angry_angels

[pairatime]

I've very glad you liked it and I'm very glad they were IC. I like both Hawkes and West, and they to make a good pair, they'll make it for each other if not for anyone else.

and I'll have to post it there, hadn't thought of it so thanks

[maccadole]

This is kind of brilliant, and indeed in-character. You've done a good job. I love SAAB. Nice to see more fic out there.

I spotted a couple of simple errors, though. Don't mean to be a party-pooper by pointing it out. Just trying to help you improve :D Perhaps you should read through the stories one extra time before posting?

The cheeriest typo was definitely "Copper". It amused me greatly. Typos are so sneaky! Especially if you type with a sneaky keyboard. Like, mine's very sensitive so I get stuff wrong a lot. ... That was not intentional! Like that! Double spaces, and double letters. That's my problem, lol.

Great story, anyway. I loved it completely. <3

[pairatime]

thanks for the heads up I'll read back over it real quick, yes key boards can be a pain but sometimes it's just bad typing too...that's my number one problem.

and I'm glad you liked the story and yes there done need to be more. I'm planning more one but it's going to be slow in coming.