Raincoats - Oneshot (Yunjae; Minsu)

Jan 13, 2009 18:41

Title: Raincoats
Author: kayjayloves
Chapter: 1/1
Pairing: Yunjae; Minsu - General.
Band: DSBK/TVXQ/THSK
Genre: gen/romance
Rating: PG
Warning: none
Disclaimer: Don't own these guys, just my interpretations of them.

Synopsis: They’re too used to having no time to breathe, by now they’ve cut their break cables and they can’t stop even with a foot ( Read more... )

fandom; dbsk, pairing; yunhoxjaejoong, pairing; changminxjunsu

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kayjayloves January 16 2009, 21:47:12 UTC
YOU BETTER COME BACK OR I'LL.... I'LL.... WTF YOU NEVER SENT ME AN EMAIL EITHER D:

LOL ♥

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siriusmoonpup January 19 2009, 17:02:35 UTC
*dies from your writing skills* so amazing
XD yes i stalked your yoosu story to here haha

my favorite is the lost/found paragraph
cuz it's all true yet written so beautifully

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kayjayloves January 19 2009, 17:08:07 UTC
*flails* i love stalkers! ♥ xD

haha, that's the little section of the fic that when i was writing it made me, myself (which is kind of odd since i'm the writer of it >_>) go oh. and everything just clicked.

and thank you. the comments mean a lot to me. <3

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siriusmoonpup January 20 2009, 04:33:38 UTC
*flails back* XDD i shall stalk your stories from now on XDD
*throws hearts at you* <3333

ah i love those moments where you just go "wow i wrote that O_O"
and that part totally had me going oh it was amazing bb
LOL dont mind my italics abuse...i just figured out how to do it XDD;;

you are very welcome dear <33

you dont mind me adding you, do you? =] i love making new friends haha

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kayjayloves January 20 2009, 21:13:14 UTC
*catches hearts* xDDD

yes, those are definitely the best moments. and wah thank you <33 lol my italics abuse is almost as bad as my strike abuse

of course i don't mind! ^^ *adds back*

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yomi_chan305 January 19 2009, 20:55:05 UTC
This whole fic...... Damn. I love the way you formatted it, and inserted definitions in here and there. It really makes the fic.

“Psychology has always been your forte,” Jaejoong notes, blank tone and blanker eyes.

A pause. “But I’m not the one in love.”



A few notices:
Lost: A heart. If found, please return to Changmin as soon as possible. He misses it.

Found: A voice. Junsu would like to know who to thank.

Lost: A family. Yoochun would like his to be returned. No prior notice needed.

Found: Parents. Jaejoong may have two too many; he’d like this to be kept quiet.

Lost: Anonymity. Please donate any extra hats to Yunho.

I honestly believe that this is the best thing you have every written. Ever.

“To us.”
Gah... the simplicity and the love and just every emotion you rolled into this is so lovely. It's just so... them. You know?

♥ Thank You

Now I need to go write you something. xD

(I think that's it. I'll be more speedy next time, I swear. xD)

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chloe1910 January 22 2009, 10:31:58 UTC
*applaude*

what a beautiful mixture of bittersweetness and warmth at the same time...

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kayjayloves January 23 2009, 23:03:05 UTC
ah thank you ♥ ^^

<33 for the comment!

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oldwillow_brook January 23 2009, 22:51:09 UTC
I memmed this because this was gorgeous that words can't even describe.

I'll be back when I can think correctly. The beauty in this story has killed my brain dead. DEAD!

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kayjayloves January 23 2009, 23:03:38 UTC
owaa, an honor. thank you ♥

*revives your brain* xDD <3!

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oldwillow_brook January 24 2009, 22:46:48 UTC
IM BACK! :DDD

And man, this has been going through my brain non-stop. I just can't really explain to you how beautiful this really was because this is the dynamics of TVXQ. This is how they work, how they live, how they survive on a daily basis.

They've changed. And things have changed. And their music has changed. And their relationship's have changed and its hard to cope with that but God you did it so well. The dynamics, and understandment of TVXQ is so different then any other author I have ever read before. It's amazing how well you capture them.

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ SERIOUSLY. Just LOVE TO YOU RIGHT NOW!

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