THE AVENGERS | CANDIED

[teaships]

Title: Candied
Prompts: 31_days | norsekink
Fandom: Thor (2011), The Avengers (2012)
Character/Pairing: Loki/Thor, Iron Man, Captain America, Hawkeye, Black Widow, Hulk
Word Count: 3515
Summary: Loki has recently discovered the existence of lollipops and he is obsessed with them to the extent of starting to obscenely lick and suck on them during

Comments

[theatervine]

Guh.
That is all.
Oh and Tony knows he wants some of that action...

[teaships]

Thank you so much! I know I'm asking for a favour, but I'm very insecure about the way this is written. Are the short sections too disjointed, pull you out of the action, take away the fluidity? Just asking for constructive criticism, don't need to answer if you don't have time. ;) Thanks, you're great. ❤

[theatervine]

Actually I think it moved along well. It's very fun and well written but at the same time, totally in character for everyone.

[teaships]

That's awesome then! Thank you. ^.^

[misselephante]

chapter 2?!!!!!!! please... pretty please... pretty, pretty please?

[teaships]

Your strangely effective self-esteem boost calls for some instant gratification. I might stick this in the story now, thanks to you. Hehe. Though I'm not sure what I would write for a second chapter. Ideas? Thank you anyway. ❤

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Loki tucked his fluttering scarf back under his long coat as Thor whipped up next to him behind Mjölnir.

“Loki.”

“Mmm.” He licked his lips then stuck the pink lollipop back in his mouth, eyes tracking the devastating path of the floating black sphere.

“Loki, what are you doing?” Thor tried again.

Loki gestured distractedly at a No Loitering sign that Thor was sure was not there a moment ago. At least it looked like he was on his day off, only an observer in this latest plot, not seeming to be maintaining any spells to direct the giant orb

[misselephante]

y u write so good! You must continue dear sir, I crave thissssss.

[teaships]

I have a story plan inspired by this but it drops the lollipop theme, though it has more Thor caring for a defensive Loki. I'm going to try do it for a big bang challenge, so >10000 words, watch this space! It means a lot that you think I write well, thank you very much again. :]

[lovegingers]

This was delicious! Thank you for writing it! ;)

[teaships]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you. ❤

[njrv16]

Omg two fills!!! I'm a very happy Op right now :D

This was great and Tony was literally making me laugh out load with all his comments.
Oh dear that last bit left me with the need of a really good fan and a nice long shower.

[teaships]

Hehe, thank you! I find Tony the easiest to write. Hmm, yes, I don't even know where the last bit came from. *shifty eyes*

[fullyunhinged]

oh my lordy

[teaships]

A very nice reaction! Thank you. ❤