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Jul 12, 2013 14:36

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Newton/Hermann - Newt rides Hermann anonymous July 16 2013, 02:07:20 UTC

Tumblr inspired prompt, here's the full thing: "Awh awh does that mean Newt rides Hermann and there are pillows for Hermann to prop his bad knee and it’s just sweet and they banter and awh awhhh"

Original message by: melliphagous
Prompt: Yours truly, ha.

Re: Newton/Hermann - Newt rides Hermann anonymous July 16 2013, 02:37:51 UTC

i liked this on tumblr and i like it even more here

secooooooooooooond

Re: Newton/Hermann - Newt rides Hermann anonymous July 16 2013, 03:46:16 UTC

oh god haha, I posted my own version of this without seeing this one! fuck, I just want this so much.

Re: Newton/Hermann - Newt rides Hermann anonymous July 16 2013, 07:37:45 UTC

Yes please, this is adorable!

FILL, part 1 cynical_sweater July 24 2013, 07:31:48 UTC

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He feels ridiculously overheated - panting, sweating, writhing - while Hermann is laying mostly still under him. It isn't fair. Really and truly. This is the first time they've done this, and Newton is damn near obsessed with making this perfect. For Hermann. For both of them. But, mostly, for Hermann. He just wants so desperately for him to feel good. And he was adamant that Hermann tell him if he felt any pain. At all ( ... )

FILL, part 2 cynical_sweater July 24 2013, 07:32:46 UTC

“Sorry, what?” He says, fiddling with the tube in his hand ( ... )

FILL, part 3 cynical_sweater July 24 2013, 07:34:08 UTC

“I trust you, and you trust me,” he tries anyway. “Besides, who have you been fucking lately? We have been literally - literally! - glued at the hip for the past million years. I would know if you were getting some. Just like you would know if I was getting some.” Based upon his deepening frown, Hermann is not buying his argument.

“Newton, honestly. We are using a condom or we're not doing this at all.” Newton sighs; he wasn't really up for the fight anyway.

“Fine,” Newton scowls, but it's small, and he reaches over to once again rummage in his beside table drawer. “But we're going to get tested for everything and the next time we do this, it'll be bare.” Hermann makes a noise that's half-incredulous, half-amusement. “I'm serious,” he grouses, slipping the plastic package into his waiting hand ( ... )

FILL, part 4 cynical_sweater July 24 2013, 07:35:13 UTC

“No. I feel fucking awesome. Do you feel?” Newton stutters, chest heaving and face flushed. “I mean. Are you? Is this... okay? Because it feels so,” he whines, and buries his face in Hermann's shoulder. “Because you feel fucking amazing and I just want.” Hermann makes an almost concerned noise and brings a hand up to run his fingers through Newton's hair ( ... )

FILL, part 5 - END cynical_sweater July 24 2013, 07:36:21 UTC

Swallowing roughly, Newton nods, though his thighs are a little sore. But he can move for Hermann. He can be good; he can get him off. He can make him feel good. Once again using the headboard for leverage, Newton rises to his knees, until only the head of Hermann's dick is inside him. With a long exhale, he slowly, tortuously, lowers himself into his lap. It's almost easier this way, in the aftermath of his own pleasure, to focus on Hermann. He's not as desperate, not as stupid. He's boneless, languid, and it's easy to get lost in riding him.

“S'good?” Newton asks, his eyes barely open. He thinks he means, am I good, but the words get lost in the happiness singing in his veins ( ... )

Re: FILL, part 5 - END anonymous July 24 2013, 18:09:55 UTC

this fic is very nearly perfect - uh. Love all the little touches, like "darling"

Re: FILL, part 5 - END cynical_sweater July 25 2013, 05:19:29 UTC

Thanks very much! :] The "darling" theme was sort of accidental, but I'm rather pleased with where it went. <3

Re: FILL, part 5 - END anonymous July 24 2013, 18:24:34 UTC

I am absolutely in awe of this! it might be my favorite fill so far. My actual heart is full of heart emotes.

Re: FILL, part 5 - END cynical_sweater July 25 2013, 05:20:06 UTC

Whaaa! No way! Thank you -- that's a huge compliment. Thank you so much!! <3<3<3

Re: FILL, part 5 - END anonymous July 24 2013, 23:09:40 UTC

Okay, this is amazing and perfect. And God, I love your dialogue. I could HEAR Burn Gorman's voice purring those lines, and I can totally see Gottlieb calling Newton "darling." Jeez. And the way you wrote spastic, adorkable Newton being worried about hurting him is just adorable and perfect. AH. Thank you.

Re: FILL, part 5 - END cynical_sweater July 25 2013, 05:22:10 UTC

Aaah, yay! The "darling" thing was kind of accidental, and I wasn't sure if it was believable, so thank you for saying that. Actually, just, thanks in general. This fic was kind of difficult to write, so that means a lot. :] I'm glad you liked it.

Re: FILL, part 5 - END anonymous July 25 2013, 22:55:00 UTC

You are very welcome! In fact I loved this fill so much, I'm thinking about drawing some fanart based upon it. :) Here's my tumblr: http://lunarinferno.tumblr.com If/when I post the drawing, it'll be there. :)

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