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Fic: Koinonia - Part Five

Oct 26, 2011 11:12

Title: Koinonia
Author: PABWECG (aka Patricia)
Beta: msLUREdin
Artist: sripley
Rating: Up to NC-17
Word Count: 58,071

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Comments 13

shar_jere October 26 2011, 16:19:21 UTC

So I took random notes while reading so I hope it makes sense LOL.
I will start with the part I didn't like which was Noah.hehe!.
I hate that Luke is helping Noah with his writing when Luke should be working on his own.I hate that Noah invited mansan over to Luke's house and putting Luke on the spot.I hate that Luke is going to married Noah.I hate that he still plan on marrying Noah even though he has strong feelings for Reid.
I love how fast you went through the boys past and it still told me everything I needed to know.I love how Luke and Reid went to help and sort of found each other.I could see why language was a huge barrier I am glad that you did that it made the story more real.I love the fact that they spend the night sleeping in each other arms.Luke was certainly not this thinking of Noah then.Luke and Reid changed each other for the better.I was sad when it was time to say goodbye but it's not the end.............right

pabwecg October 26 2011, 16:29:41 UTC

Wow, you read fast! I can't believe you've reached the end of Part Five already - that's like 30,000 words or so.

SO glad you're enjoying Reid and Luke's developing relationship, and totally understand all your anger at Noah (and Luke sometimes).

And yes, of course there's more. Part sic is up, and now I'm eating lunch and going for a walk, but then I will post more!

shar_jere October 26 2011, 17:16:04 UTC

Ha in high school when I fell in love with books I join a speed reading club I am such a book nerd .now that I am university it's coming in handy.just finish reading part 6 and I glad you're taking a break because I have 10 chapters to read for social studies and my head is killing.I can't wait for the rest though.

joann414 October 26 2011, 18:30:45 UTC

Reverent silence.

pabwecg October 27 2011, 01:01:08 UTC

<3 Thanks so much. Yeah, that goodbye is hard...

95baker October 27 2011, 02:02:20 UTC

Patricia...you are killing me. I can hardly read through all the tears, good tears, happy tears, sad tears, tears of a love so deep. Wow. I do not know what to say.

To love and let go...a true love in my mind. My heart is breaking for both. I have faith that Love will find a way.

Off to read more and get some more Kleenex.

Hugs, Kate

pabwecg October 27 2011, 15:15:45 UTC

Aww, thanks Kate. That means so much to me, that you were so moved. Yeah, that was a hard moment for them both (and us) as they said goodbye.

<3

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pabwecg November 7 2011, 12:50:59 UTC

And you deserve much, much more than what I'm saying here, but I'm kinda stunned speechless by the over-whelming emotions this has evoked in me. In fact, I don't think I've ever felt closer to Luke and Reid and their love than I have in this chapter.

Now you've stunned me silent.

Or almost, LOL. But seriously, I love you're comments, but to have rendered you speechless...wow.

tldreamer November 12 2011, 21:10:31 UTC

What a lovely section!! I can't wait for Luke to get back to Oakdale and realize he's made a mistake (and that Noah is not the love of his life!).

pabwecg November 16 2011, 19:47:15 UTC

Aw, thank you again.