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there is no moon, jack/claire, scars, r! crickets April 21 2010, 23:14:56 UTC
there is no moon, r!
lost, jack/claire; 410
wow, so... this is kind of smutty, be forewarnedThere's a scar beneath her chin that Jack can only see when she's on top of him, Claire's body moving in concert with his, the friction between them making his eyes cloud over, making it hard to concentrate, to focus enough to process the hidden mark ( ... )

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Re: there is no moon, jack/claire, scars, r! gigglemonster April 21 2010, 23:21:17 UTC
*fans self* hoooot
LOVE it! Totally gorgeous and intimate. Such a lovely snapshot.

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Re: there is no moon, jack/claire, scars, r! crickets April 21 2010, 23:26:52 UTC
I don't know what's possessing me to write the smut but I'm going with it, lol.

Thank you! ♥

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Re: there is no moon, jack/claire, scars, r! ozmissage April 21 2010, 23:26:52 UTC
*breaks out fan*

GUH. This is so incredibly hot. And the scar imagery! That was seriously like a keyboard smash of my favorite kink.

And it's so sad and beautiful at the same time. I'm in love with how you write these two. Thank you so much for this! *runs off to reread*

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Re: there is no moon, jack/claire, scars, r! crickets April 21 2010, 23:33:51 UTC
Oh gosh I'm so happy you liked it. I kinda wanted to go all in with the kink and make the entire thing about it. I'm so glad it smashed your keyboard... hahaha.

;)

I increasingly love writing these two. This is such a fun way to do it too. I'm so glad for the five acts meme right now. It's such an unexpected and great creative exercise! And I see you're getting a lot of use out of it yourself.

And speaking of these two, did you see the other fic I wrote for the five acts meme for them? Here? Is it weird to pimp yourself in comments? I just feel like it got lost in the crazy lost!day shuffle yesterday. I hope to write more of them too.

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