Lost Fic: I Would Keep You, If I Could (Juliet/Sawyer)

[ozmissage]

Title: I Would Keep You, If I Could
Pairing: Juliet/Sawyer
Rating: R (sexual content)
Word Count: 1,981
Warning: Angst. A whole lot of angst, with bonus time-traveling.
Spoilers: Through “The Incident”
Summary: Sawyer can’t hold on to her.
Disclaimer: Lost is not mine. Neither is “Downtown”. Some dialogue is excerpted from “The Incident”, “Through

Comments

[chev_y]

The memories of Juliet being stolen from him, little by little, as time resets itself, is heartbreaking.

This is a beautiful story and well written. I found it very creative and interesting. Thank you so much for posting.

[ozmissage]

Thank you for such lovely feedback! I'm glad you liked it.

[propernice]

oh my gosh, I love this so much. At first I thought it would just be snippets of their life together, and then I realized what you were doing - rewinding the tape and having him forget piece by piece. That was heart breaking and wonderful <3

[ozmissage]

Thank you!

[jesterlady]

Oh, that's horrible! Why does he remember everyone else? :( But it was beautiful. I loved it! Nicely done.

[ozmissage]

I was going with the idea that by detonating the bomb Juliet somehow changed time and she would no longer have to come to the island.
The others by virtue of being touched by Jacob would have to come no matter what (I'm assuming).
Heh, time travel makes my brain hurt, I hope whatever the show comes up with is less headache inducing than that.

Anyway, thank you for the feedback, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

[tellshannon815]

Great work! Loved the idea of this, although I will admit to hoping it doesn't turn out like this on the show.

[ozmissage]

Me and you both. I'm hoping there's no reset at all; I want everyone remembering exactly what's happened to them during the last three years.

Thank you for the feedback! :)

[wtfsignmeup2]

This killed me,so sad. I loved it, but it broke my heart.

[ozmissage]

Thank you! I try for less angst next time. ;)