I don't even know where to start with this -- INCREDIBLE, just ... breathtaking.
I love the chances you take here, especially with using the second-person perspective. It all just works fabulously, and it's absolutely heartbreaking -- the Charlotte mention, the recognition of his fate and his acceptance of it, the final line -- I just adore it, and I wish I had more words to tell you how much.
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I love the chances you take here, especially with using the second-person perspective. It all just works fabulously, and it's absolutely heartbreaking -- the Charlotte mention, the recognition of his fate and his acceptance of it, the final line -- I just adore it, and I wish I had more words to tell you how much.
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It means so much to me that you liked this! Your the Queen of Dan as far as I'm concerned and I'm always nervous about writing him. :D
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