Comments | ozmissage: Lost Fic: Miles in Wonderland

ozmissage

Lost Fic: Miles in Wonderland

Aug 25, 2009 13:59

OMG, I wrote something. *Snuggles flist* I’m so glad you guys gave me prompts. More ficlets are on their way, I just got bowled over by ( Read more... )

fic:lost, gen, fic: miles

Comments 22

elliotsmelliot August 26 2009, 12:05:45 UTC

What a great fic! You dropped me down, right alongside Miles. I felt like I was running around with him, totally disorientated, except I was lucky enough to be comforted by his familiar snark. There were so many great lines here - from the Dad/Chang call in the beginning to his lament for the seventies. I also laughed at this cheeseburger whimsy:

No one ever tells you to pack a lunch before you go on the run and attempt to erase three years of history. There should be a pamphlet.

I loved the interactions with Boone and Sawyer. This was all so good from beginning to end. It was such an intriguing scnenario to ponder, and so well presented with equal amount of wit and fear.

ozmissage August 26 2009, 17:17:27 UTC

Wow, thank you so much for such a thoughtful comment! I'm glad you liked it.

Whenever people go on the run for extended periods of time on television I always worry about them getting a chance to eat(because clearly I'm a crazy person), so I had to throw that in there. ;)

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ozmissage August 26 2009, 17:20:24 UTC

Aww, you made me blush! Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it (although I'm sorry for endangering your computer).

When I was writing this I kept thinking about what would happen to Miles when Hurley started taking his census. Poor guy, he can't catch a break. ;)

tellshannon815 August 26 2009, 21:44:19 UTC

Love this idea! I would also like to see this as a series, if you ever did get the inspiration.

ozmissage August 27 2009, 02:13:17 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm toying with the idea of a second part...we'll see. ;)

angela_weber August 27 2009, 20:27:51 UTC

Oh, wow! This is seriously amazing. What a wonderful idea--and your writing makes it extraordinary! Your Miles is perfect. And the Sawyer cameo was jarring and a bit scary and so, so Sawyer. And . . . all of it. I'm sorry, I'm a bit incoherent! Fantastic work.

ozmissage August 28 2009, 04:00:02 UTC

Wow, thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I have to say it broke my heart a little to write original flavor Sawyer. I don't want him to be angry anymore.

jam_min August 28 2009, 08:07:58 UTC

Oh wow! What a wonderful idea, I really enjoyed reading this.

ozmissage August 28 2009, 14:15:11 UTC

Thank you so much!