Comments | ozmafics: Drabble: Now, Ron/Hermione, PG13

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Drabble: Now, Ron/Hermione, PG13

Aug 15, 2009 16:45

( Not now, not now, her eyes kept saying... )

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Comments 6

rose_starr August 16 2009, 07:02:08 UTC

Oh honey, that is lovely!! Emotions so true and honest and raw in the aftermath of that day!! ♥

shygryf September 9 2009, 05:44:23 UTC

fantastic. honest and dizzying and oh so Ron

mollywheezy September 9 2009, 12:41:13 UTC

This is just beautiful! You captured Ron's internal monologue perfectly! Great job! :D

prplhez8 September 9 2009, 13:16:21 UTC

Hiya! Newbie over here! Just wanted to tell you that his was LOVELY!

Fave line: He needed a chance to feel her under his hands, warm and real and solid-because he’d lost count of how many times he’d seen a blast of green light miss her by millimeters.

*sigh* Great insight into Ron Weasley, which is not easy overmuch at all! :)

luvscharlie October 6 2009, 18:02:54 UTC

So well done. I've always wanted to read an "after it all" fic that was true to the emotions we assume they must be feeling. This is it.