Fic: The Hero's Heart, Neville/Ginny NC17

[ozmafics]

“Only if they ask for the right thing, and I'm pretty sure I asked for the one thing that they won't think to ask for.”

”How do you know?”

”I don't, but I've got a pretty good idea. You were brilliant, by the way.”

I've never been so scared in my life. Well, once, maybe but I wasn't myself then, so...”

”Really? You couldn't tell.”

”Well,

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[vegablack62]

I'm here by way of crackbroom where coffee-n-cocoa is recing Neville-Ginny fics. She has rec'd this story as one of the best embodiments of what this pairing is all about. I have to agree.

Reading this the two seem perfect for each other.

You did a great job of melding the memories of their time together in the war and Neville's current thoughts in the pub. I liked Luna's role in getting them together and the interest you have Hannah show in him. The scenes where he hears other people talking to him as he tries to leave and is obsessing over Ginny, his friend's affection, was also a great way to show where Neville fits in the world now, and his attitude toward his position. His tenderness toward Ginny and his feelings for her was lovely. I liked the way you reveal that he knows her body and has been intimate with it before you show the sex. That provided a nice twist.

[ozmafics]

Thank you so much for the lovely review!