beechercreature - exquisite artwork. Love the balance of light and dark, the ethereal quality and the juxtaposition of the text amongst the images. Beautiful!
aleanorblack - this story is a trip! I like the idea of them putting everything out on the table, in a way doing penance for all their sins, as a way for them to finally move forward together -- and then you pulled the rug out from under me (and Toby). I wasn't expecting that at all and I love how his reaction at the end is genuine heartbreak and loss for Chris, for realizing that as difficult and brutal things were with Chris they were also passionate and genuine and true feelings and for that NOT to have existed at all is a punch to the gut, a shank to the soul. Very interesting take on the artwork. Good job!
A very interesting twist in the end. I remember listening to the song on the radio, and someone saying BK always have a way of ending up together, no matter what universe. So, this is a very interesting way to play it. I can imagine having a dream where I would be so involved in it that I would be sad to find out it was only a dream. Then the details would slowly fade away throughout the day. Which in Beecher's case, the process will be much longer, considering he had slept for two whole years.
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Then the details would slowly fade away throughout the day. Which in Beecher's case, the process will be much longer, considering he had slept for two whole years.
In the case for Beecher, I think he will never forget. As we seen throughout the series, Beecher really loved him. When it was just a dream, I think the pain will not go away. All he can do is adapt and take it one step at a time.
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aleanorblack - this story is a trip! I like the idea of them putting everything out on the table, in a way doing penance for all their sins, as a way for them to finally move forward together -- and then you pulled the rug out from under me (and Toby). I wasn't expecting that at all and I love how his reaction at the end is genuine heartbreak and loss for Chris, for realizing that as difficult and brutal things were with Chris they were also passionate and genuine and true feelings and for that NOT to have existed at all is a punch to the gut, a shank to the soul. Very interesting take on the artwork. Good job!
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Thank you! :) This means so much to me. Ironically, I was this close of not doing the end but...*shrugs* at the last minute I changed my mind.
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Then the details would slowly fade away throughout the day. Which in Beecher's case, the process will be much longer, considering he had slept for two whole years.
In the case for Beecher, I think he will never forget. As we seen throughout the series, Beecher really loved him. When it was just a dream, I think the pain will not go away. All he can do is adapt and take it one step at a time.
Thank you for taking the time to read it! :)
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