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dustandroses April 19 2011, 07:56:18 UTC
nindevotee: Sorry I don't know SVU well enough to know Kathy, but I really like the emotions that are obvious between the characters. Anger and pain and hurt all vie for attention in a way that really grabs you. The way Chris is caught in mid-motion creates a sense of activity, urgency even, that ratchets the tension even higher. Well done ( ... )

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cmk418 April 23 2011, 16:33:32 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed what I wrote.

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nindevotee April 23 2011, 21:02:46 UTC
Sorry I don't know SVU well enough to know Kathy

I don't think SVU gave anyone enough info on her to really know her, except that she's always blaming Elliot for one thing or another. At least that's all I've really gotten from it. Glad you like the graphic.

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trillingstar April 27 2011, 12:59:59 UTC
I'm pretty sure Ozsaur's the genius behind that line (although our writing really twined together, which is a neat-o feeling). I'm so pleased that you liked it, thank you, Dusty. *hugs*

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aletter2elise April 21 2011, 05:24:21 UTC
nindevotee: Your art shows such intensity between Elliot,Chris, and Kathy! You captured Elliot's emotion perfectly with the screencap you picked for this art. Kathy's facial expression makes my heart ache for her and you don't even need to see Keller's face. We all know how manipulative and arrogant he is lol. Great work! :)

cmk418: Kathy's pov is right on the dot. Her comparison with both her husband and Keller. How she feels some kind of attraction to Keller made my heart pound. Great job! :)

trillingstar and ozsaur: OOOO Wow drama, drama everywhere. Too perfect! Kathy's pov in this story is so intense and heartbreaking. You've made her such a strong brave woman in the whole story which makes me love her character in this fiction. Elliot and Chris's undying friendship and feelings for each other really got to me as well. You both did a wonderful job with this and make a great team. Bravo to ya both! :)

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cmk418 April 23 2011, 16:41:08 UTC
Who wouldn't be attracted to Keller in some way?

It makes me happy that you think I was able to capture Kathy's pov because I actually know so little about her.

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nindevotee April 23 2011, 21:11:38 UTC
Thanks! I have another version of this scenario, only it's with Toby.

Yeah, Chris needs to hurry up and meet Toby and stop causing so much grief for Elliot. ;) You know Kathy will breathe a sigh of relief when that day arrives. :)

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nindevotee April 23 2011, 21:12:25 UTC
Thanks! I have another version of this scenario, only it's with Toby.

Yeah, Chris needs to hurry up and meet Toby and stop causing so much grief for Elliot. ;) You know Kathy will breathe a sigh of relief when that day arrives. :)

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nindevotee April 22 2011, 03:22:27 UTC
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!

...will comment more later, so for now it's...

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!

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trillingstar April 27 2011, 13:03:49 UTC
:D

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ozsaur May 13 2011, 23:32:33 UTC
This is a most flattering comment! Thank you! :)

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michele659 April 22 2011, 07:34:45 UTC
nindevotee-I loved the artwork-very intense and tension filled. It really did look like a moment frozen in time between them and of course Chris is in the middle of it all!

cmk418- I really liked the idea of Kathy wanting the two of them and thinking it might be what they all needed. Like merging the two characters of Elliot and Chris might even them both out,and be better for her as well(and who could argue with that,lol).

trillingstar and ozsaur: I loved seeing the relationship between Chris and Elliot through Kathy's eyes. Her slow realization of what was always between them was painful,especially now that she's pregnant.
Chris' need and fear of abandonment hurt. You did a good job portraying his feeling of always being the one left out or left behind. And I felt for Elliot as well in what has to be a moral and emotional dilemma for him which has no easy resolution.

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cmk418 April 23 2011, 16:45:24 UTC
Honestly, I don't remember ever seeing Kathy on the few episodes of SVU that I have watched, but it always seemed like Chris was Elliot's shadow side, and confronted with the prospect of twice the Meloni, I'm sure very few women would turn that down.

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nindevotee April 23 2011, 21:19:41 UTC
I'm glad you like the graphic. Chris is the thorn in Elliot's side, always obsessively vying for Elliot's attention, much like he did with Toby. I can imagine he's an endless source of trouble/grief for Elliot and his family, but you know Elliot loves him unconditionally.

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trillingstar April 27 2011, 13:10:04 UTC
We did sort of torture them all here quite a lot, didn't we? *laughs* I'm so happy that you liked the outside view of Chris and Elliot. I've always found Kathy to be a sympathetic character - I think we've had this talk? Anyway, super happy that it all worked for you. Thank you!!

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trillingstar April 23 2011, 08:48:29 UTC
nindevotee, I was immediately drawn to the look on Kathy's face, and I knew I wanted to do something with that, to put it into words. Even though you've assigned them sharing space in a triangle (of sorts), for me it still felt as though Kathy was the one coming between Chris and Elliot, not Chris between the Happy Couple.

cmk418, Yes please, I'll take those possibilities. I liked how you contrasted the 'twins,' and I can just picture Chris's devilish grin. Fun!!

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cmk418 April 23 2011, 16:47:37 UTC
Thank you! Keller can seduce anybody.

I'm glad you liked it.

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nindevotee April 23 2011, 22:03:15 UTC
Initially I thought it'd be interesting if Chris pretended to be Elliot with Kathy and Elliot eventually found out, thus the confused look on Kathy's face. But I like the OzStar version much better...gee, I wonder why?

Chris would definitely be a hard act to follow...I kinda feel bad for Kathy. She'll have to contend with him until he meets Toby.

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