daicon_oroshi - This is a great drawing. I love the attention to detail from their expressions to their clothes. There's the contrast of opposites that works really well with them and conveys a whole world of possibilities about what's going on.
cmk418 - Great drabble! I love the notion of Keller justifying his actions in a way that makes sense to him. In his own way he sees a bigger picture that Beecher's not always aware of. I like that Keller can explain away everything he's done as being out of love and that eventually even his death will be seen as a selfless sacrifice. You capture his obsession with Beecher well, the unwavering focus and attention.
dustandroses - I really dig the premise of your story. It's one I've secretly wanted someone to write for awhile (as my own personal kink) so to have you do that is pretty awesome
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Thank you! One of the things I loved about season six is that we were never sure about Keller's death - was it an accident, was it one last 'fuck you' to Toby, or was it truly a self sacrifice? And there's a dialogue in season three between Keller and Sister Pete in season three about rewriting the history between Keller and Beecher so that Keller turns out to be the hero - I can see him trying to justify everything that way.
dustandroses : This is a wonderful AU! The idea of Toby only being in Oz during the time as Vern's prag, getting released, meeting Chris on the outside, and Chris ending up his savior..Genius! You captured such intensity and power in writing how Toby tries to fight the bad memories and Chris being the key to help ease the pain away. Chris's possessive nature you have written perfectly as well. The love scene was amazing. Tender yet rough, well balanced! I'm so loving this fiction can't ya tell? hehe Beautiful! :)
cmk418 : OOOO this drabble is Ozsome! Kellers never-ending love and devotion for Toby, you don't need many words and you have captured it all perfectly! Everything Chris has done, even his death, was all for Toby. Though Chris won't see it, Toby has realized Chris did it all for love just like the ending of season 6. Well written! :)
daicon_oroshi : This drawing is just gorgeous! Love the expressions on their faces and coloring. I love the idea of showing Chris as Toby's hero by having him carry Toby. Just lovely! :)
Daicon Oroshi: your art was a great starting point. Toby looks so startled.
Cmk418: we needed a season 7, to see how long it would take for Toby to understand what Keller did.
Dustandroses : great concept, Toby having been traumatized by Vern, and the circumstances of the robbery and the escape making Toby simultaneously relive his ordeal and start healing, thanks to Keller.
daicon_oroshi this is such a funny picture, and generates a whole burrow full of plot bunnies! great work!
cmk418 amazing, I love how you make the metaphors work, every single one of them, without it getting awkward or strained or pretentious even once, on the contrary, it flows, all the way through.
dustandroses Wow... Wow... This. Was. Hot... I'm might have to get back to you, because I'm speechless right now. What I can say right now though, besides this being sofuckinghot, is that the relationship between the past and present work really well, and reading this fic was like watching an episode/a film play out (which is a great compliment from me, since I'm a film geek/film maker!) Yeah.. that's all I've got. Loved it (perhaps too much!) great work! ;)
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cmk418 - Great drabble! I love the notion of Keller justifying his actions in a way that makes sense to him. In his own way he sees a bigger picture that Beecher's not always aware of. I like that Keller can explain away everything he's done as being out of love and that eventually even his death will be seen as a selfless sacrifice. You capture his obsession with Beecher well, the unwavering focus and attention.
dustandroses - I really dig the premise of your story. It's one I've secretly wanted someone to write for awhile (as my own personal kink) so to have you do that is pretty awesome ( ... )
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You captured such intensity and power in writing how Toby tries to fight the bad memories and Chris being the key to help ease the pain away. Chris's possessive nature you have written perfectly as well. The love scene was amazing. Tender yet rough, well balanced! I'm so loving this fiction can't ya tell? hehe Beautiful! :)
cmk418 : OOOO this drabble is Ozsome! Kellers never-ending love and devotion for Toby, you don't need many words and you have captured it all perfectly! Everything Chris has done, even his death, was all for Toby. Though Chris won't see it, Toby has realized Chris did it all for love just like the ending of season 6. Well written! :)
daicon_oroshi : This drawing is just gorgeous! Love the expressions on their faces and coloring. I love the idea of showing Chris as Toby's hero by having him carry Toby. Just lovely! :)
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Cmk418: we needed a season 7, to see how long it would take for Toby to understand what Keller did.
Dustandroses : great concept, Toby having been traumatized by Vern, and the circumstances of the robbery and the escape making Toby simultaneously relive his ordeal and start healing, thanks to Keller.
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cmk418 amazing, I love how you make the metaphors work, every single one of them, without it getting awkward or strained or pretentious even once, on the contrary, it flows, all the way through.
dustandroses Wow... Wow... This. Was. Hot... I'm might have to get back to you, because I'm speechless right now. What I can say right now though, besides this being sofuckinghot, is that the relationship between the past and present work really well, and reading this fic was like watching an episode/a film play out (which is a great compliment from me, since I'm a film geek/film maker!) Yeah.. that's all I've got. Loved it (perhaps too much!) great work! ;)
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I'm glad you enjoyed what I wrote and that the metaphors worked for you.
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きゃあ素敵！拘束されたビーチャーさんを抱きかかえるケラーさんという状況はとても萌えます（＞▽＜）手錠とか束縛シュチュエーションは好きなので（笑）
この絵のケラーさんはヒーローなのか、それともやっぱり犯人なのか妄想が膨らみます。素敵な絵をありがとうございます！！
cmk418
Oh,this drabble was amazing.You capture Keller's character so well.I love it.
dustandroses
I love this AU story!I just can't tell you how I love your story with my poor English.but I so love it.
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