Comments | oxymoronic: <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/phantomjam">phantomjam</a></strong>, I can only apologise.

oxymoronic

phantomjam, I can only apologise.

Feb 10, 2009 19:45

I promise you porn. I give you smutless shit.

Title: Interlude
Fandom: The Matrix (I KNOW I SAID I WOULDN'T, BUT I PROMISED. And it's not porn, anyways D:)
Pairing: Smith/Neo
Rating: 15 at most for some abysmal language.
Length: 1,239 words.
Status: Complete.

Notes: Slots in in the first movie, between Neo being invited out by Choi and meeting Trinity at ( Read more... )

character: agent smith, pairing: neo/smith, film: the matrix, fic, character: neo/thomas anderson

Comments 7

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oxymoronic February 10 2009, 21:20:50 UTC

I just felt guilty; I did promise it. D:

adkfjljfgdg that song. THAT SONG.

credulesque February 10 2009, 20:43:49 UTC

I can honestly say I have never even considered reading Matrix fic before but it will always remain one of my favourite films and this was just awesome, lol at Mouse as well! ♥

oxymoronic February 10 2009, 21:21:29 UTC

Oh, lol! I just got into them, which means unfortunately I'm like... the only person left XD *sigh*

but still, glad you liked~!

dachinchilla February 12 2009, 04:55:41 UTC

YES!~ Hot! YES~!

<---- incoherence is a sign of fangirly approval

“Live a little,” he murmurs, and pulls out the earpiece with his teeth.

That is the bit that killed me.

oxymoronic February 12 2009, 17:29:56 UTC

Hot smutlessness? Oh, there's an achievement :D

a;lsdkjdfg you quoted *dies with happiness* I enjoyed writing that bit too :D

So thank you for commenting~!

heta_noitio February 22 2009, 21:37:56 UTC

I cannot resist the urge to quote your fic back at you.

“Ho-ly shit.”
It kind of sums it all up, really.

Seriously. That was so darn hot without anything heavy actually happening (which makes it better that there was no pr0n, actually, it would have been less good if there had been. I think). Thomas' thoughts were so - dare I say mundane? - average, so delightfully normal upon his contact with Agent Smith, which makes it all the more grin-worthy if you think about what happens later.

The last line is a killer, too.

(Also, I liked the typography ♥ because I'm a dork who pays attention to things like that.)

oxymoronic February 23 2009, 18:09:12 UTC

You quote; that is more amazing than anything.

(That was entirely the reason I didn't write any. I kept trying to slot it in and it just didn't work.) It was designed to slot in and make links, so I'm glad that worked.

(The typography? Oh, you are awesome. That's the most wonderful compliment ever. It's never appreciated. So thank you.)