Comments | oxygenlove: baby, you're more than just a one hour drive

oxygenlove

baby, you're more than just a one hour drive

Feb 19, 2011 14:33

Title: Never Look Back
Pairing: G-Ri
Rating: PG-13
Summary: This isn't exactly how Seungri imagined his college life to be. AU.
A/N: Written for unactivist in the gdkissri fic exchange. Her prompts were 1) are we meant for each other? 2) please don't be in love with someone else and 3) jiyong tries really really hard not to love seungri.

( Can I be honest with you? )

alternate universe, bigbang, pg-13, fanfiction

Comments 59

summanaro February 19 2011, 07:04:16 UTC

I love this. I love how real it is. their emotions and how they experience them are genuine and realistic. I believed the complications of their relationship throughout the whole thing. most writers just do the "I love you" "I love you too" instant gratification thing. it's nice to see a fic that has the characters go through real motions of falling in love. I also kind of like the out of order way of presenting it because it makes it seem like there's an ending twist. while reading I was like WHAT HAPPEN and it was interesting how I kind of slowly found out how their relationship worked and then the whole thing came full circle at the end. good job overall. :3

oxygenlove February 19 2011, 07:05:52 UTC

i honestly thought i tagged my post wrong for a second and panicked

oxygenlove February 19 2011, 07:11:06 UTC

You have no idea how huge a compliment this whole comment is. So thank you thank you thank you ♥

vaneszikkipower February 19 2011, 07:48:37 UTC

As usual this is amazing. The way they'3e both in conflot mentally but the way their hearts decides for them.
It was so beautifully written omoooo.
Congrats to u for being 2nd!!!

oxygenlove February 21 2011, 00:09:04 UTC

You can't really choose who you'll fall in love with, yes?
And awww... bb, you are so sweet :) Thank you so much!

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oxygenlove February 21 2011, 00:18:29 UTC

Oh bb, so adorable! Your comments always make me go ^_____^
Thanks for reading ♥

finkling February 19 2011, 10:56:31 UTC

♥

i think i may have gotten myself in love with you

oxygenlove February 21 2011, 00:31:34 UTC

I love you too, bb ♥

squippy67 February 19 2011, 15:42:04 UTC

YAY YOU POSTED IT AND FINALLY I CAN COMMENT ON THIS FIC! and jsyk, i actually guessed that you wrote it when i first read it no, i'm not a stalker who can recognise your writing *coughs*

i love that although this is AU, i can somehow see like, that's what jiyong would possibly do in real life, in a situation where he realises he's in love with seungri. like idk, i just found it in character. urgh like, the way seungri reacted and all that, i found it so real and the whole thing was just, realistic. okay i don't even know what i'm talking about anymore but i just want you to know, i love this fic!!

and seriously you wrote this in the last minute? all i could come up with in the last minute was a porn fic a crappy fic and you just came up with this gem of a story. *stares at you with admiration* ♥

here's a seungri kiss for you *chuuuuu*

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oxygenlove February 21 2011, 01:07:13 UTC

Really? You did? Ah! I think it's because I recycle my thoughts and metaphors, lol :)

And I am so glad you found this realistic. I think we've all imagined what it could be like for the two of them if they were in different circumstances, yes? I'm happy I got to make it as real as possible for you~

Yep! lol, sometimes, when I post things and you people leave this beautiful comments, I can't help but wonder what you guys would say if you knew how frustrated and pathetic I looked like while writing it, haha. If only you guys knew...

AND THAT FIC IS NOT CRAPPY. FGDSNAJXK I flailed for a good 10 minutes on it in Twitter.

♥