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[oxygen_losers]

Title: You're Just A Boy Who's Afraid Of The Dark (10/11)

Rating: Mmm, R for trauma? No boisex in this one.

Pairing: Gabe/William

Summary: “Fuck you, Brendon, you two aren’t the only ones who’re worried, alright?”

“Okay, okay. Both of you. Calm the fuck down now or get the fuck out. We’re going to do a quick check of the house again, and

Comments

[painmakesmereal]

Now I'm sitting here crying at the image in my head of a scared beaten William hiding under the bed, and all the guys trying to get him out. And at the image of him kicking and screaming and fighting with them, as they all tried to calm him down. It's so sad, and also so well writen, I can't wait for more, I swear I check for this story all the time cause I want more all the time.

[elenlor_edhelen]

This story is just too wonderful to actually exist...The way you write William's Stockholm is just...I can practically feel his fear.

I also adore the way all of the FBR gang is described, the way you show the effect William's disappearance has had on them, especially Mike.

[amethyst__angel]

Wiiiiiiiillllll.

I love this. I love the way this is, the way Will is, and I hope to god you killed Gabe, cause he deserves it.

But that wasn’t right because they’d taken him from his basement and Gabe wasn’t here and how was he ever supposed to be safe again?

God, Will. I love him so much, you have this character down perfectly, it's absolutely brilliant.

[xxdance]

I'm not crying, but that's only because I'm sort of devoid of emotion because that? That was just. It was. It was beyond comprehension.

I am trying to keep the essay down. It wants to come out.

But:

Dear ending:

If you are not happy, I hope you never sleep at night again because I will probably be up sobbing for some nights myself. This story has been so, so, so incredibly fucked that it needs a happy ending to help with the fact that I keep shuddering in horror. Please be happy, please be happy, pleasebehappypleasebehappy.

Thank you,
Missy.

[cheshire_cat94]

Once upon a time there was a writer named oxygen_losers who was kind of amazing.

The end.