Generation Kill fic: drowning but not scared of the water

[oxoniensis]

drowning but not scared of the water [Generation Kill, Brad/Nate, NC-17, 1,359 words, a 4_a_star commission for mlyn. A huge thank you to kahtyasofia for betaing. amberlynne safe! Also on AO3 here.]

Comments

[dsudis]

Guhhh. So them, so hot. ♥

[oxoniensis]

Thank you! Porn isn't my strong suit, so I'm glad it was hot!

[jujubinha]

Oh!

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3

It's their *anniversary*! And the gift was all ours!

Well, OK, I doubt they're complaining. ;)

This is AWESOME!

[oxoniensis]

Hahaha, I try to write a PWP and then I make it their anniversary and all mushy! I fail at porn, but I think I win at schmoop!

Thank you!!

[mlyn]

Guh. DELICIOUS. This is fantastic and totally worth the wait. Your descriptions are wonderfully vivid, but I particularly like the narrative prose in Nate's head. Great balance of art and smut. Thank you so much!

[oxoniensis]

I wish you hadn't had to wait so long, so thanks for being okay with the wait!

Great balance of art and smut.

Yay, thank you!

[someonesgrlbomb]

Hello, I'm a lifelong late commenter. Our support group never meets - no one can show up on time.

I was surprised no one commented on:

"... stuttering out meaningless phrases, breathless fragments of words, unintelligible sounds that he knows Brad will be able to put together and understand."

Because how many porny stories describe that babble happened? Bajillions. And that's fine. But YOU took that convention and added in some LOVELY schmoop. Well played!

[oxoniensis]

*g* I'm often late to the fic party too!

I'm glad you liked the schmoopy moment - sometimes I just can't resist!