X-Men: First Class fic: Unpopular Names and Impossible Loyalties

Jul 31, 2011 18:27

Honestly, I don't know what the hell happened here - this is not the porn I sat down to write! Also, it's not the Erik/Charles story I've been working on for the last couple of weeks. Just some angsty porn.

Unpopular Names and Impossible Loyalties [X-Men: First Class, Charles Xavier/Erik Lehnsherr, R, 1,026 words, written for Porn Battle XII, ( Read more... )

fiction: x-men, fandom: x-men, fiction

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kellifer_fic July 31 2011, 23:19:32 UTC
Simply lovely and bittersweet.

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oxoniensis July 31 2011, 23:20:58 UTC
Thank you! <333

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sara_wolf August 1 2011, 00:04:51 UTC
This was beautiful.

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oxoniensis August 1 2011, 19:58:31 UTC
Thank you!

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glitterglam13 August 1 2011, 00:55:26 UTC
I'm not a fan of second person POV either, but here it worked perfectly. I loved the mix of moods you used and the melancholy quality you infused the story with.

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oxoniensis August 1 2011, 19:59:44 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really glad it worked for you!

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stagnacia August 1 2011, 05:20:53 UTC
well, the second person fits perfectly here for me, and you made it great! very lovely fic o read <3

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oxoniensis August 1 2011, 20:00:37 UTC
Thank you! I did actually try to rewrite it in the third person, but it just didn't work, so I'm glad I stuck with it, and that you enjoyed it!

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daria234 August 1 2011, 05:24:39 UTC
Hot and lovely and wonderful fic

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oxoniensis August 1 2011, 20:01:10 UTC
Thank you so much!

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