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Porn Battle VII (The Seven Deadly Sins) - entry post 2

Jan 29, 2009 23:43

We're just four days into the Battle, and I don't think one post will big enough for all the pornlets, so I'm opening a second one. All new pornlets to go here, please.

( copy of the battle rules )

challenge: porn battle, challenge

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Trap, Angel the Series, Faith/Wesley, shotgun damalur January 30 2009, 00:51:52 UTC

When he fucks her, it's never on the bed. No, she's not good enough for the bed. When he fucks her, it's always on the floor. He's always on top, and he never takes all of his clothes off, and he always keeps the shotgun in easy reach.

It always starts when he grabs a thick fist of her hair and forces her to her knees. Sometimes she sucks him off, but more usually he follows her down and strips off her pants with quick, economical movements. She tried to talk the first time, to make some smart comment, but he stood up and walked away and she didn't see him again for a week and a half. She doesn't talk anymore.

If she isn't wet for him - well, that's never happened, so she hasn't had to find out the answer to that if. He shoves into her without any foreplay, without checking to see if she's ready for him. Sometimes he takes her on her back, so she can't see his face. She prefers that, almost, doesn't have to see those blue laser eyes boring into her head ( ... )

Re: Trap, Angel the Series, Faith/Wesley, shotgun htbthomas January 30 2009, 02:10:42 UTC

Oo, my. Wow, that was intense. :)

Re: Trap, Angel the Series, Faith/Wesley, shotgun stephanometra January 30 2009, 02:44:58 UTC

Oh, beautiful.

Re: Trap, Angel the Series, Faith/Wesley, shotgun thepouncer January 30 2009, 04:06:35 UTC

♥_♥

Re: Trap, Angel the Series, Faith/Wesley, shotgun michellek January 30 2009, 06:58:31 UTC

This is fantastic.

Re: Trap, Angel the Series, Faith/Wesley, shotgun anr January 30 2009, 13:30:28 UTC

Oh, that is awesome! I love the way you answered the prompt.

Re: Trap, Angel the Series, Faith/Wesley, shotgun advection January 30 2009, 16:00:45 UTC

Gritty and intense, love the imagery of the shotgun and its hard cold tactile reality when her hand knocks into it, love the bleak poignant line She's never let any other man be on top of her; he never says any name but hers when he comes, enjoyed this a lot.

Re: Trap, Angel the Series, Faith/Wesley, shotgun pesha January 31 2009, 08:36:04 UTC

EXCELLENT ending. The danger is real for both of them. Fabulous!

Re: Trap, Angel the Series, Faith/Wesley, shotgun distractedone February 1 2009, 22:06:28 UTC

! That was wonderful.

Re: Trap, Angel the Series, Faith/Wesley, shotgun witchnyn February 5 2009, 04:11:40 UTC

Wonderful. I have actual chills.

Re: Trap, Angel the Series, Faith/Wesley, shotgun empressvesica February 7 2009, 18:05:19 UTC

*blinks* I wasn't quite expecting that but it's amazing - raw and all tangled in hurt. Lovely.

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