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Porn Battle VII (The Seven Deadly Sins)

Jan 25, 2009 18:48

Porn Battle VII (The Seven Deadly Sins) IS A GO

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Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror curtana January 26 2009, 14:34:41 UTC

"You want to look pretty for him, don't you ( ... )

Re: Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror sandrine January 26 2009, 14:51:40 UTC

Oh, wow. This reads like an actual missing scene from the show. It's bittersweet and sad and wrong but also very natural and very them. Brilliant!

Re: Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror curtana January 27 2009, 05:15:13 UTC

Thanks very much!

Re: Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror redcandle17 January 26 2009, 15:33:48 UTC

Oh, that's just plain wrong and yet so right. It feels very true to the characters. Excellent work.

Re: Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror curtana January 27 2009, 05:15:43 UTC

*g* Thanks!

Re: Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror ingridmatthews January 26 2009, 16:18:08 UTC

Wonderful and SO VERY WRONG. But awesome and true to the show.

Re: Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror curtana January 27 2009, 05:16:13 UTC

Thanks!

Re: Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror sainfoin_fields January 26 2009, 18:01:23 UTC

This makes bizarre amounts of sense, and you've got Atia's voice completely down.

Re: Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror curtana January 27 2009, 05:17:00 UTC

Thanks. In that fucked-up family, I find any pairing can make some amount of sense ;)

Re: Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror jacklemmon January 26 2009, 23:45:50 UTC

This is so absolutely Atia. I love her so and she just shines through every word here. I agree with another commenter that this is like a deleted scene from the show.

Well, well done. :D

Re: Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror curtana January 27 2009, 05:17:23 UTC

Thanks very much!

Re: Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror advection January 27 2009, 06:44:36 UTC

Great voices, enjoyed the writing, feels very true to the show.

Re: Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror curtana January 27 2009, 13:41:56 UTC

Thank you!

Re: Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror dancesontrains January 27 2009, 20:48:39 UTC

This is excellent, and very in character. Thank you!

Re: Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror curtana January 29 2009, 14:54:49 UTC

You're welcome, and thanks very much.

Re: Bitter Pride, Rome, Atia/Octavia, bitter, mirror notexotic January 29 2009, 00:56:58 UTC

This is Atia in all her pride and frustration. As others have said, this would have so perfectly into the show. Excellent work.

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