Fringe ficlet: Deep Purple Cow

[oxoniensis]

Deep Purple Cow [Fringe, Peter, Walter, Olivia, PG-13, 571 words. For lady_match in the Fall Fandom Free-For-All.]

Comments

[scribblinlenore]

Very nice! I love how you draw the three characters, Olivia's impassiveness, Walter's almost child-like need to blurt out every thought he has (even when what he's saying isn't at all child-like *g*), and Pete's instinct to play mediator and peacemaker. It says a lot about all of them and how they work together as a team and relate to one another as people.

[oxoniensis]

Aww, thanks! I like the dynamic between the three of them (and Astrid, though she seems to be mostly in the background), so I'm glad it worked for you!

[saavikam77]

ROFL!!! XD Too perfect. Your characterizations were just dead-on, with Peter's irritation and Walter's uncanny ability to talk about the most random, inappropriate things, then bring it back to a normal topic without even flinching. :p Brilliant. And I have to admire Olivia's ability to compartmentalize, too. :p

[oxoniensis]

Thank you so much! I do just adore Walter and Peter together, so they were great fun to write - glad you thought the characterisations were good!

[tiffosis]

this is great! fringe is my fav new show, and you've done great voicing peter and walter.

[oxoniensis]

Thank you so much - I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[sori1773]

Well, they gave me a cow

....and right about there I fell over laughing. heee! I love your Peter -- it's spot on. :D

[oxoniensis]

Hee, thanks! The story started off with just the opening line and the line about the cow in my head - Walter is just too much fun!

[taurenova]

Lovely. You've captured them really well. I particularly like your Walter voice.

[oxoniensis]

Thank you! It's always a relief to know the character voice works when I'm attempting a new fandom!